Question

短文改錯 。
     假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中
共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
     增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
     刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
     修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
     注意：
     1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
     2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第十一處起）不計分。

     Everyone in the world want to succeed. In fact, an opportunity comes every once in a while. On most
of occasions, it appears without noticed. Only when the opportunity has left us do we realize that we have
lost one. Some people know the importance of opportunities. They know an opportunity is factor in
achieving success. But they are always ready for an opportunity when it arrives. However, other people
give in the efforts to seek opportunities and grasp them. They are used to wait for opportunities knocking
on our doors. Most people are given opportunities, but only the more intelligently and hardworking people seize them.
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Answer 1

     Everyone in the world want to succeed. In fact, an opportunity comes every once in a while. On most
                                     1. wants
of occasions, it appears without ∧noticed. Only when the opportunity has left us do we realize that we
2. 去掉                                3. being
have lost one.Some people know the importance of opportunities. They know an opportunity is∧ factor in
              4. it                                                                                                                          5. a
achieving success. But they are always ready for an opportunity when it arrives. However, other people
                          6. So
give in the efforts to seek opportunities and grasp them. They are used to wait for opportunities knocking
    7. up                                                                                              8. waiting
on our doors. Most people are given opportunities, but only the more intelligently and hardworking people
9. their                                                                                              10. intelligent
seize them.