Question

【題目】分析以下漫畫(huà)并根據(jù)要求完成一篇不少于120的英語(yǔ)短文。

要點(diǎn)如下：

1.概括漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容；

2.分析產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因；

3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)這一問(wèn)題的看法。

注意：文章開(kāi)關(guān)已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

（秦建宇漫畫(huà)）

As is vividly illustrated in the picture......

Answer 1

【答案】

As is vividly illustrated in the picture,in some schools study is the only thing they focus on, and they pay no attention to students’ other abilities, thus turning out students who cannot cater to the needs of society.

The picture sets me reflecting on our present school education. There are in my opinion, many factors contributing to the phenomenon.First, faced with fierce competition, many students desire to achieve high scores in the College Entrance Examination and enter an ideal university, which will give them an edge in their future career, so they cannot afford to spend time on things other than study. Second, with pressure from parents and society, schools have to sacrifice students’ development of other abilities for their academic performance.

As for me, it is of great importance for students to develop various kinds of abilities. Only in this way can they adapt to our changing society. Besides , it is high on the agenda for schools to switch their attention to cultivating students’ all-round abilities.

【解析】本文涵蓋了題目所要求的三方面內(nèi)容，文章的三部分連貫自然，一氣呵成。畫(huà)面上有一棵大樹(shù)，只剩下唯一一根“學(xué)習(xí)”的樹(shù)枝，其他的如“動(dòng)手能力”、“組織能力”、“表演能力”等樹(shù)枝都被“某些學(xué)校教育”這把鋸子鋸掉了。更難能可貴的是文章中較多地使用了復(fù)雜的句型結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯，展示了作者良好的語(yǔ)言功底。首段中thus turning out students who cannot cater to the needs of society.其中cater to the needs of society意為“滿足社會(huì)的需求”。The picture sets me reflecting on our present school education，本句中，set sb.doing sth.使某人處于某種狀況；reflect on認(rèn)真思考。faced with fierce competition,為過(guò)去分詞作狀語(yǔ)；which will give them an edge in their future career, which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等；Only in this way can they adapt to our changing society.本句使用了倒閉結(jié)構(gòu)�！癘nly+狀語(yǔ)”前置時(shí)，句子使用部分倒裝。另外最后一句 it is high on the agenda for schools to switch their attention to cultivating students’ all-round abilities.使用了固定句型，意為：對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是當(dāng)務(wù)之急。