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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last summer holiday, I paid visit to Hong Kong with my father. To their surprise, we found the streets were not as wide as those in our city. The bus and cars were running very fast. The sidewalks were always crowding because many visitors went there every day. The people there were friendly, and when we were asked them for help, they were willing to help us. We take many photos there and then we shared them on WeChat Moments（朋友圈）. We also bought some gifts there for much things were sold for a discount. It’s so hardly to say goodbye to Hong Kong. We hope to go there once more unless we have chances.

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【解析】本文為記敘文。敘述了作者與爸爸一起去香港去旅游的經(jīng)歷。

1.考查固定搭配。去年暑假我和爸爸一起去了香港。pay a visit to …為固定搭配，意為“去某地參觀、旅游，拜訪某人”，因此在在paid后添加a 。

2.考查人稱代詞的一致性。我們驚訝的是，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)那兒的街道不像我們城市的街道那么寬。根據(jù)文章可知，是我們去旅游，所以是我們很驚訝，故把their改為our。

3.考查名詞復數(shù)。根據(jù)后面的“cars were running very fast”可知，街上的公交車和轎車很多，所以要用復數(shù)。因此把.bus改為buses 。

4.考查形容詞。人行道總是擁擠不堪，因為每天都有許多游客去那里。crowding為名詞“擁擠，聚集”， 而本句中要用形容詞，因此crowded“擁擠的,塞滿的”符合題意，crowding改為crowded

5.考查謂語動詞的語態(tài)。那里的人很友好，當我們請他們幫助時，他們愿意幫助我們。分析句子when we were asked them for help, they were willing to help us，本句中的we與謂語動詞ask for 是主動關系而非被動關系，因此要把were多余，可刪除were

6.考查謂語動詞的時態(tài)。分析文章可知，本文講述的是過去的事，所以以過去時為主，故把take改為took 。

7.考查形容詞。根據(jù)后面的“much things”可知，things為可數(shù)名詞的復數(shù)，而much只能修飾不可數(shù)名詞，修飾可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)要用many修飾。所以把much改為many 。

8.考查固定搭配。很多東西都是打折出售的。at a discount of….為固定搭配，意為“按…的折扣”，所以把for改為at

9.考查形容詞。和香港告別真是太難了。Hardly為“幾乎不”，而“hard”意為“難的，硬的”。因此 hardly改為hard

10.考查連詞。如果有機會我們希望再去一次。unless意為“除非…”,而句中要用如果，即連詞“if”，故把 unless改為if.