Question

【題目】英語課上老師讓同學們寫一篇英語文章，談談對當前中學生中存在的某些飲食現(xiàn)狀的看法。

提示如下：

1.越來越多的中學生不喜歡吃蔬菜水果，甚至不吃早餐，而是喜歡吃垃圾食品；

2.對健康的飲食習慣同學們有不同看法；

3.你的看法和觀點。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Healthy eating habits are very important for our health. We should build healthy eating habits. We should eat fresh vegetables and fruits everyday.They supply rich and the necessary vitamins for us. We also should eat less meat everday.And we had better drink a glass of milk in the morning or at night. Besides, we should focus on abalanced diet, which assures us the necessary nutritions. Junk food is a fatal killer for our health so that we should stay far from them. It is said that most of students do not eat anything at all in the morning. It is very bad for our health. Breakfast is the most important meal for people.

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求英語課上老師讓同學們寫一篇英語文章，談談對當前中學生中存在的某些飲食現(xiàn)狀的看法。考慮用一般過去時來寫。要點：1.越來越多的中學生不喜歡吃蔬菜水果，甚至不吃早餐，而是喜歡吃垃圾食品；2.對健康的飲食習慣同學們有不同看法；3.你的看法和觀點。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結構緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如:focus on集中于，far from遠離。還使用了定語從句Besides, we should focus on abalanced diet, which assures us the necessary nutritions增加了文章的可讀性。