Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Tom在疫情期間(the epidemic period)不得不居家學(xué)習(xí)，但又經(jīng)常和父母爭(zhēng)吵，他發(fā)來(lái)email向你尋求幫助，如何解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)給他回復(fù)。

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 首先時(shí)間要用在學(xué)習(xí)上；

2. 注意形成好的作息習(xí)慣；

3. 還要適當(dāng)?shù)刈鲂┘覄?wù)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom

I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in dealing with your parents. Honestly speaking, it is not rare during the epidemic period, but we should make efforts to get along well with them. My advice is as follows.

To start with, we should devote our time to our study instead of killing time in playing on virtual games or something Equally importantly, we should develop a good habit of living. After all, early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy, wealth and wise. If possible, you'd better help your parents around the house, which is of great benefit to the whole family

If you follow my advice, you will be in harmony with your parents.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

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這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求作者給朋友Tom寫(xiě)信，給他提出解決和父母經(jīng)常吵架的建議。

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總

要求：

1. 首先時(shí)間要用在學(xué)習(xí)上；

2. 注意形成好的作息習(xí)慣；

3. 還要適當(dāng)?shù)刈鲂┘覄?wù)。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）

have trouble in doing sth./ deal with/ make efforts to do sth./ get along with/ to start with/ instead of/ help sb. do sth./ follow one’s advice/ be harmony with

第三步：連詞成句

1. Knowing that you are having trouble in dealing with your parents, I feel nervous and concerned.

2. Honestly speaking, this phenomenon is not rare during the epidemic period, but we should make efforts to get along well with them.

3. My advice is as follows.

4. To start with, we should devote our time to our study, after all, playing on virtual games or something is a waste of time.

5. Equally importantly, we should develop a good habit of living.

6. After all, early to bed and early to rise makes a person healthy, wealthy and wise.

7. If possible, you'd better help your parents do some housework, which is of great benefit to the whole family.

8. If you follow my advice, you will be in harmony with your parents.

第四步：連句成篇（加入銜接詞或從句）

表示并列的連詞：and/but/or/so…

狀語(yǔ)從句連詞：because/ if/ though/ although…

定語(yǔ)從句連詞：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改潤(rùn)色（加入高級(jí)詞匯或短語(yǔ)）