Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇I5。詞左右的英語短文
Chinese students will start their rwo-mnnth summer vacation. But Chinese parents have already decided how their children will spend the summer
Generally speaking, there are basically two ways for Chinese students to pass their sum- met vacation: one, relax at home or go to join some summer camps; two., sign up for classes, such as Olympic math, English, and musical instruments. A few lucky children do get to..en- joy the whole summer without spending time in a classroom. Yuan Weiwei, for example, has made a point of not enrolling her twelve-yesrold son, Li Zhuoqi, in any summer lessons.
`This summer vacation is just for fun,”she said. " I think most parents feel they In to prepare their children so early. I don't blame them but I think the best thing is to find as much non-working time for the children as possible.＂However, Zhu Baocheng, 14 years old, isn't so lucky., whose parents plan to enroll him on a worse of English and writing. training program
Should Chinese parents let their children play and get closer to nature, or have more classea so that they won't fall behind? Perhaps everyone has an answer in one's own heart.
［寫作內(nèi)容］
1.以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2.以約120個詞對父母如何讓孩子過暑假進(jìn)行討論，內(nèi)容包括：
(1)你對孩子目前過暑假的看法；
(2)你打算怎樣利用暑假
［寫作要求］
1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得首」妾引用
原文中的句子
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱
［寫作標(biāo)準(zhǔn)］
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫
                                                                                     

Answer 1

From the passage we know that in China there are two different ways how parents help their children to spend their summer vacation.The two ways of course produce different reactions of their children.
During the school time Chinese students work hard to get good grades but ignore their outdoor activities.If such situation continues,they are just going to end up having a weak body.How can they contribute to the country with their weak body in the future?Actually,they already spend too much time indoors when they are at school.Therefore,they should make the best use of summer vacation to get themselves developed mentally and physically. ?
Faced with the upcoming summer vacation, I plan to do sports as usual and learn to play table tennis. It's good for my health. Then I plan to spend two weeks traveling. Also, I want to be a volunteer to serve in the community.   I think I'll have a good time in the vacation.   

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點(diǎn)去表達(dá)，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)了常用的詞組：end up doing最終做…，contribute to 對…做出貢獻(xiàn)， make the best use of充分利用， get themselves developed使自己得到發(fā)展，好的句型有： Faced with the upcoming summer vacation, I plan to do sports as usual and learn to play table tennis.這句話用了過去分詞做狀語。