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3．假設(shè)你是李津，為響應(yīng)國家厲行節(jié)約的號召，請你以"為資源、為環(huán)保，厲行節(jié)約"為主題，向某英語報社編輯寫一封信，表達你對此主題的看法，提出你的建議．
內(nèi)容主要包括：
1．節(jié)約與資源的關(guān)系--節(jié)省資源造福子孫等．
2．節(jié)約與環(huán)保的關(guān)系--減少浪費改善環(huán)境等．
3．舉例說明中學生該如何厲行節(jié)約．
4．倡導社會保持節(jié)約的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Editor，
I'm writing to share my opinions about trying to save both for natural resources and the environment．Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day，so we should save some for our offspring．Meanwhile，saving can help us avoid producing waste，which will make our homeland more beautiful．（高分句型一）As students，we should make contributions to saving resources and protecting our environment．For example，we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books．In this way，more trees would be saved．What's more，we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame，so we call for everybody's action to do what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．（高分句型二）
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Meanwhile，saving can help us avoid producing waste，which will make our homeland more beautiful．
與此同時，節(jié)約能幫我們避免制造浪費，那樣可以使得我們的家園更加的美好．
高分句型二：
What's more，we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame，so we call for everybody's action to do what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．
除此以外，我們中國人有養(yǎng)成節(jié)約的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)而且視浪費為一種可恥的行為，所以我們號召我們每個人做自己能做的一起來使我們的美好生活一直持續(xù)下去．
句型一 ①saving can help us avoid producing waste 該句是使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作主語
           ②which will make our homeland more beautiful．該句是一個由which作關(guān)系代詞，且在從句中充當主語的非限制性定語從句，which替代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容．
句型二 what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．該句是一個由what充當連接詞，位于動詞do后面的一個賓語從句
除此以外，本書面表達還使用了以下重要短語和固定用法：make contribution to doing sth      what's more

解答 Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day，so we should save some for our offspring．Meanwhile，saving can help us avoid producing waste，which will make our homeland more beautiful．（高分句型一）As students，we should make contributions to saving resources and protecting our environment．For example，we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books．In this way，more trees would be saved．What's more，we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame，so we call for everybody's action to do what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．（高分句型二）
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin

點評 本書面表達為提綱類，寫作時應(yīng)注意觀點的論述要依據(jù)所給的文字提示或說明，盡量做到用詞準確無誤，語言簡潔明了．