Question

17．假如你是李華，你的加拿大筆友Bob 來信談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)廣安的情況．請你用英語寫一封回信．回信必須包括下表中的內(nèi)容：

地理位置與人口	1．位于四川以東200多公里處的渠江之畔．有400多萬人，廣安人友好、好客．
自然情況	2．風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，名勝眾多，尤其是小平故居，每年有很多游客游覽．
存在問題	3．水，空氣污染 4．交通擁擠，停車難．
對廣安發(fā)展的看法	5．（內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定）

注意：
詞數(shù)：100左右．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：好客hospitable
Dear Bob，
It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city…
                                                                  
Best wishes．Yours faithfully，Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇書信體作文．作文的主旨是：介紹家鄉(xiāng)廣安的情況．主要包括幾大方面的內(nèi)容：地理位置與人口，自然情況，存在問題及對廣安發(fā)展的看法．其中大部分要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)提示出來了，而且要點(diǎn)比較齊．只要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢就行了．但在"對廣安發(fā)展的看法"方面，內(nèi)容是由考生自己擬定，故屬于半開放類作文．考生可以自由發(fā)揮，寫出兩三個(gè)要點(diǎn)就可以了．
注意回信作文首先要簡短的提一下寫信人的問題，用一個(gè)承接的句子，如本文中It's very kind of you to write to me…Now I'd like to tell you something about還可以記住一個(gè)通用的開頭格式：Thanks for your letter．I'm very glad to hear from you．（謝謝你的來信，收到你的信我非常高興）這是一個(gè)比較通用的回信開頭．其他的內(nèi)容要依據(jù)來信內(nèi)容或者要向?qū)Ψ疥愂龅膬?nèi)容而定．

解答 Dear Bob，
       It's very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city．Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown，Guangan City．Guangan is located on the Qujiang River，about over 200 kilometers east of Sichuang Province．Guangan has a population of more than 4 million people，who are friendly  and hospitable．（高分句型一）Besides，with its beautiful scenery and many places of interest，especially Xiaoping's Hometown，thousands of tourists are attracted to visit here．However，there are still some problems，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours．And it's hard to park．
      In my opinion，the city should develop its economy scientifically．I would also think that the growth of the private cars should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in the future．（高分句型二）
     You're welcome to visit Guangan．I'm looking forward to your coming．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Li Ming．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．