Question

2．假設你是晨光中學的高中生李華．你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀學生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語．你希望參加此活動．請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信：
●對此活動的認識（如對本人、學生級社會的益處等）
●個人優(yōu)勢（如性格、獨立生活能力、語言能力等）
●你的計劃（如怎樣進行輔導等）
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內容充實、行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
晨曦希望小學 Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．
I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．

Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是書信類作文，根據(jù)所給要點內容給學校寫一封申請信，申請用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語．屬于提綱作文．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：As far as I am concerned （據(jù)我所知），result in （導致），be qualified for （有資格，合格），be independent （獨立），instructive（有教育意義），stimulate interests in（激發(fā)…的興趣）．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（對活動的認識）
I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（個人優(yōu)勢）
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（計劃）
Yours sincerely，
 Li Hua

點評 寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，并充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當．語言力求準確、簡潔．應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．