Question

15．如今，生活在大都市有許多優(yōu)勢，同時也有不少煩惱．請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文，介紹城市生活的利與弊，并表明你的態(tài)度（是否喜歡城市生活）文章開頭已給出．
注意：100詞左右．

利	弊
方便購物	花銷大、住房昂貴
交通便利	空氣污濁
休閑、娛樂形式多樣	公交車擁擠

Nowadays living in big cities has both advantages and disadvantages．
                                                                        

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息如今，生活在大都市有許多優(yōu)勢，同時也有不少煩惱．請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文，介紹城市生活的利與弊，并表明你的態(tài)度（是否喜歡城市生活），寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從利和弊由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】There are a lot of good points living in big cities現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語；it is easy for people to go shopping since most big cities have shopping centers．Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；Buses，subways and taxis can take you anywhere you want．句中使用定語從句；However，not all things are statisying．句中體現(xiàn)部分否定；Accommodation in big cities is so expensive that one can hardly afford it．結(jié)果狀語從句用于句中；I still love the life in big cities because it is full of excitement，which is appealing to young people．原因狀語從句和非限制性定語從句完美結(jié)合；另外，However，F(xiàn)urthermore，As for the transportation，In spite of the disadvantages，的運用為文章增色添彩．

解答 Nowadays living in big cities has both advantages and disadvantages．
      There are a lot of good points living in big cities．First，it is easy for people to go shopping since most big cities have shopping centers．Convenient transportation is another reason for people to love city life．Buses，subways and taxis can take you anywhere you want．Besides，with all kinds of entertainment，one can never feel bored．（高分句型一）
      However，not all things are statisying．The biggest problem is the high expenses．Accommodation in big cities is so expensive that one can hardly afford it．（高分句型二） Furthermore，the air in big cities is not so fresh as that in the counytryside．As for the transportation，it is often very croeded in public transport，especially in rush hours．
      In spite of the disadvantages，I still love the life in big cities because it is full of excitement，which is appealing to young people．（高分句型三）

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