Question

2．假設(shè)你是李華，你校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)將選舉新一屆主席，你打算參加競(jìng)選．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇競(jìng)選演講稿．內(nèi)容包括：
1．個(gè)人的優(yōu)勢(shì)介紹（性格、能力等）；
2．當(dāng)選后的打算；
3．表達(dá)當(dāng)選的愿望．
注意：詞數(shù)100左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Good afternoon，everyone，
My name is Li Hua．It's my honor to run for president of the English Club in our school．                 
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
For another，I have been class monitor since Junior High School，which helped me gain much experience in organization and management．
高分句型二：
I will work together with other members，making the English Club more attractive and helpful．
句型一 which helped me gain much experience in organization and management．該句是一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的費(fèi)限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which在定語(yǔ)從句中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)，替代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
句型二 making the English Club more attractive and helpful．該部分使用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)，現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)在句中充當(dāng)伴隨狀語(yǔ)．
除此以外，該書面表達(dá)還使用了以下短語(yǔ)和高級(jí)詞匯：be fit for 適合…communicate with sb 與某人交流

解答 Good afternoon，everyone，
   My name is Li Hua．It's my honor to run for president of the English Club in our school．
I'm confident that I'm well fit for the position．For one thing，I'm outgoing and good at communicating with others．For another，I have been class monitor since Junior High School，which helped me gain much experience in organization and management．（自我介紹）（高分句型一）If I'm chosen，I will organize more after-class activities to enrich our lives．I will work together with other members，making the English Club more attractive and helpful．（高分句型二）I really hope that you can give me a chance and I'm sure I will be a good president．（提出愿望）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，在寫作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語(yǔ)言將作文展示出來(lái)．