Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，為了鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們愛國(guó)讀書，向優(yōu)秀榜樣學(xué)習(xí)。學(xué)校委托你邀請(qǐng)優(yōu)秀校友，第24屆中國(guó)青年五四獎(jiǎng)?wù)芦@得者Ms. Wei 回校演講以激勵(lì)同學(xué)們激揚(yáng)青春，逐夢(mèng)前行。請(qǐng)你寫一封邀請(qǐng)函。

內(nèi)容需包含以下幾點(diǎn)：

1. 對(duì)其獲獎(jiǎng)表示祝賀。2. 說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)其演講的目的。3. 告知演講的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。

注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫。3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。

參考詞匯：National May Fourth Youth Medal中國(guó)五四青年獎(jiǎng)?wù)?/span>

Dear Ms.Wei,

I am Li Hua,president of the students union of our school.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ms. Wei,

I am Li Hua, president of the Students Union of our school. I am very pleased and greatly honored to invite you to give us a speech on behalf of all the students.

First of all, I’d like to extend our warmest congratulations to you on your winning this years’ national May Fourth Youth Medal. As the students studying at the same school where you once studied, we feel so proud of you and admire what you have achieved in your career. You have definitely set an excellent example for us younger generation. Inspired by your successful experience, all of us will keep working hard and chase our dreams more bravely. Therefore, we would feel much honored if you could make it to the speech. The speech is arranged on this Saturday, May 30th in No.2 lecture Hall. It starts at 9 o’clock am and is supposed to last for 2 hours, after which there will be half an hour question and answer session.

We hope that the lecture can fit in your schedule and sincerely look forward to your coming!

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封邀請(qǐng)函。

第一步：

審題：邀請(qǐng)函 邀請(qǐng)校友Ms. Wei 回校演講

人稱：第一、二人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分說(shuō)明寫信的目的，第二部分對(duì)其獲獎(jiǎng)表示祝賀,說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)其演講的目的，并告知演講的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，第三部分期待她的到來(lái)。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 說(shuō)明寫信的目的：邀請(qǐng)她回校給同學(xué)們作演講

2．對(duì)其獲獎(jiǎng)表示祝賀,說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)其演講的目的

①表示祝賀：祝賀她獲得中國(guó)五四青年獎(jiǎng)?wù)?/span>

②說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)其演講的目的：她為同學(xué)們樹立了優(yōu)秀的榜樣，希望她成功的經(jīng)歷能激勵(lì)同學(xué)們不懈地努力

③告知演講的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：本星期六5月30日上午9點(diǎn)，在第二報(bào)告廳

3．希望時(shí)間能夠符合她的日程安排，期待她的到來(lái)

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語(yǔ)）

president of the Students Union；be greatly honored to do…；give a speech；on behalf of ；

extend one’s warmest congratulations to sb. on…； feel proud of；achieve；set an example for；successful experience；inspire sb. to do…；chase dreams；make it；arrange；be supposed to；last；question and answer session；fit in

第三步：連詞成句

(1)I am Li Hua.

(2)I am president of the Students Union of our school.

(3)I am very pleased and greatly honored to invite you to give us a speech.

(4)I’d like to extend our warmest congratulations to you on your winning this years’ national May Fourth Youth Medal.

(5) We feel so proud of you and admire what you have achieved in your career.

(6)You have set an excellent example for us younger generation .

(7) We are inspired by your successful experience .

(8)All of us will keep working hard and chase our dreams more bravely.

(8) We would feel much honored if you could make it to the speech.

(9)The speech is arranged on this Saturday, May 30th in No.2 lecture Hall.

(10) It starts at 9 o’clock am and is supposed to last for 2 hours.

(11) After the speech, there will be half an hour question and answer session.

(12)We hope that the lecture can fit in your schedule.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點(diǎn)詞匯)

用同位語(yǔ)連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(1)I am Li Hua.

(2)I am president of the Students Union of our school.

→I am Li Hua, president of the Students Union of our school.

用分詞作原因狀語(yǔ)連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(7) We are inspired by your successful experience .

(8)All of us will keep working hard and chase our dreams more bravely.

→Inspired by your successful experience, all of us will keep working hard and chase our dreams more bravely.

用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句連接下面兩個(gè)句子

(10) It starts at 9 o’clock am and is supposed to last for 2 hours.

(11) After the speech, there will be half an hour question and answer session.

→ It starts at 9 o’clock am and is supposed to last for 2 hours，after which there will be half an hour question and answer session.

適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯、復(fù)雜句式提升文章的檔次，增加文章的可讀性。