Question

假如你叫李華,上周日在Green Supermarket 里買了一支"No-Spot"面霜,你使用以后發(fā)現(xiàn)該產(chǎn)品并沒有廣告中所宣傳的功效.請根據(jù)以下要點向超市經(jīng)理寫一封投訴信,希望能解決此事.需包含下列要點:

廣告中承諾No-Spot安全有效，能去除斑點;

謹(jǐn)遵說明使用，效果并非如此:﹙1﹚有副作用(舉例子說明);（2）影響工作。

要求賠償醫(yī)療費; 4.發(fā)票保留至今，以備起訴使用。

注意：1.書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出;2.詞數(shù)120左右;3.參考詞匯:去斑點面霜No-spot cream 收據(jù) receipt

A Letter of Complaint

Dear manager,

I am writing to complain about your awful “No-spot” cream.

 

 

 

 

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear manger,

I am writing to complain about your awful product “No-spot” cream. In your advertisement, they claim that this cream is safe and effective, which can remove the spots on the face.

I bought this cream in Green Supermarket last Sunday . I still keep the receipt.

Last Sunday evening, I applied the cream to my face following the instructions carefully . To my great surprise, when I got up the next morning, I felt my face tickling. During the following two days, this symptom became worse and worse, which greatly affected my life and work.

You have guaranteed that your products are safe, but now it has a side effect on me. I want to send back this cream, meanwhile your company should pay for the cost of medical service for my treatment. If you fail to do so, I will accuse your company of cheating in the advertisement.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假如你叫李華,上周日在Green Supermarket 里買了一支"No-Spot"面霜,你使用以后發(fā)現(xiàn)該產(chǎn)品并沒有廣告中所宣傳的功效.請根據(jù)以下要點向超市經(jīng)理寫一封投訴信,希望能解決此事.需包含下列要點。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點說明】they claim that this cream is safe and effective, which can remove the spots on the face.

這里含有一個賓語從句和一個非限制性定語從句。During the following two days, this symptom became worse and worse, which greatly affected my life and work.這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。

考點：話題類書面表達