Question

15．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的高中生李華．你校擬選拔一批優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語．你希望參加此活動．請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信：
1．對此活動的認識（如對本人的…益處等）；
2．個人優(yōu)勢；　　　
3．你的計劃．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100；
2．可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學(xué) Chenxi Hope Primary School

Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（對活動的認識）
I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（個人優(yōu)勢）
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（計劃）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是書信類作文，根據(jù)所給要點內(nèi)容給學(xué)校寫一封申請信，申請用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語．屬于提綱作文．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：As far as I am concerned （據(jù)我所知），result in （導(dǎo)致），be qualified for （有資格，合格），be independent （獨立），instructive（有教育意義），stimulate interests in（激發(fā)…的興趣）．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
      I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（對活動的認識）
      I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（個人優(yōu)勢）
      My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（計劃）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．