Question

酒駕是一個(gè)談?wù)摵芫玫脑?huà)題。酒駕釀成的悲劇一直在發(fā)生，盡管?chē)?guó)家出臺(tái)了嚴(yán)厲的法規(guī)，但是依舊屢禁不止。前有高曉松，近有王志文，這些名人大腕們都沒(méi)能避免。請(qǐng)你針對(duì)酒駕這一現(xiàn)象，給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一篇英文書(shū)信，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />要求：1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫、通順。
參考詞匯：酒駕：drunk driving
Dear Sir,
Though severe laws and regulations are carried out, cases of drunk driving happen frequently.
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Answer 1

Dear Sir,
Though severe laws and regulations are carried out, cases of drunk driving happen frequently. Even some famous persons like Gao Xiaosong and Wang Zhiwen involved in.
I am opposed to drunk driving and severer punishment is necessary. For one thing, bans on drunk driving help protect the safety of others and their wealth. If someone drives after drinking, it is a great danger to all the others. For another, bans on drunk driving are helpful to the drivers themselves. As we all know, many drivers lose their lives because of drunk driving every year, which also makes their family into great trouble.
Thus, in my opinion, anyone mustn’t drive after drinking wine, let alone drunk driving. Remember: never drive you car after drinking and drive without drinking forever.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本文講述的話(huà)題是酒駕；已經(jīng)給出了部分的文字提示，考生可以從目前的實(shí)際情況出現(xiàn)，酒駕屢禁不止，名人先后違紀(jì)。直接表達(dá)作者認(rèn)為應(yīng)該從嚴(yán)從重處理，因?yàn)檫@樣是對(duì)生命的尊重。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。
考點(diǎn)：考察半開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話(huà)題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。