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17．針對目前高中生學習壓力較大的現(xiàn)狀，有人以"Effective Ways to Release the Stress"為題于上周調(diào)查采訪了五個學校的800名高中學生．請你根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一份報告，并談?wù)勛约夯蛏磉呁瑢W釋放壓力的有效方法．

人數(shù)	減壓方法
35%	做運動
45%	聽音樂
20%	咨詢心理老師

注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120左右
2．調(diào)查報告的題目和開關(guān)已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）
3．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Effective Ways to Release the Stress
Nowadays more and more senior students are getting stressed in their study．In order to find out effective ways to release the stress，
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Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)圖表將文章的要點概括完整，內(nèi)容充實而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感；要用詞十分恰當，段落過渡自然．寫出內(nèi)涵意思，本文最大的特點就是想象力十分豐富，文章要有血有肉，無論是長短句的搭配，還是從句的使用，都要做到恰當．
In order to find out effective ways to release the stress，a survey was made last week in five schools．（高分句型）句子帶有in order to引導(dǎo)的目的狀語
When I'm stressed，I usually do lots of weightlifting to get myself tired．（高分句型）句中帶有when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句

解答 Effective Ways to Release the Stress
    Nowadays more and more senior three students are getting stressed in their studies．In order to find out effective ways to release the stress，a survey was made last week in five schools．（高分句型）Altogether 500 students were interviewed，and some if interesting results were as follows：About thirty-five percent of the students let out their stress by doing sports．They play football，for instance．Meanwhile，another forty-five percent of them release their stress by listening to different kinds of music．Interestingly，the rest twenty percent of them usually get help from the school psychological consulting office．
    When I'm stressed，I usually do lots of weightlifting to get myself tired．（高分句型）Then I'll have a good sleep．In this way，I'll feel relaxed and forget all about my worries．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．