Question

13．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom 最近感覺(jué)學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，難以應(yīng)對(duì)．他來(lái)信問(wèn)你有沒(méi)有類似的情況．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom寫封回信．
1．告訴他你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中也會(huì)有壓力；
2．談?wù)勀銓?duì)壓力的看法；
3．就如何減壓提出你自己的建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Tom，
I have received your letter asking me whether I have some stress in my study．As a senior high school student facing the college entrance examination，I surely have some stress．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，a proper amount of stress is beneficial to us．（高分句型二）It can inspire us to work harder and be more creative．However，too much stress can make us break down．Therefore，we should do something to reduce the stress．For example，we can listen to music to help us relax．Besides，we can play some interesting games with our friends．（高分句型三）I hope my advice will be helpful to you．
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom 最近感覺(jué)學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，難以應(yīng)對(duì)．他來(lái)信問(wèn)你有沒(méi)有類似的情況．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom寫封回信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：告訴他你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中也會(huì)有壓力；談?wù)勀銓?duì)壓力的看法；就如何減壓提出你自己的建議   2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：college entrance examination高考；In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看；be beneficial to 對(duì)…有益；However然而；Therefore因此；Besides另外；be helpful to 對(duì)…有幫助；
As a senior high school student facing the college entrance examination，I surely have some stress．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，a proper amount of stress is beneficial to us．（高分句型二）
Besides，we can play some interesting games with our friends．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I have received your letter asking me whether I have some stress in my study．As a senior high school student facing the college entrance examination，I surely have some stress．（高分句型一）
       In my opinion，a proper amount of stress is beneficial to us．（高分句型二）It can inspire us to work harder and be more creative．However，too much stress can make us break down．Therefore，we should do something to reduce the stress．For example，we can listen to music to help us relax．Besides，we can play some interesting games with our friends．（高分句型三）I hope my advice will be helpful to you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．