Question

【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應為150左右。

When I was young, I always knew my parents had trouble with money. We would go to yard sales all the time, buy everyday supplies at Dollarama and work and eat at a soup kitchen four nights a week.

Then, a new man walked into the soup kitchen and asked me what my name was. As I told him that my name was Angela, my mom handed me the soup spoon and hair net(發(fā)網(wǎng)) to start getting to work. After that, I couldn’t find the strange man again. I searched everywhere for him and even asked the other men and women in the kitchen if they had seen him. My mom thought I was going crazy, saying that there was no one with me when she came to hand me my stuff. She said I had been sitting alone and that it seemed I was talking to myself.

Later that night in the car, my mom was crying. I asked her what was wrong and she told me that the rent on our apartment had gone up and that my grandma had died. She didn’t know how she was going to pay for the funeral and the rent. I guaranteed that I would help pick up the odds and ends(雜事) before she made as much as possible.

The moment we got into the apartment building, she asked me to run to the mail room and grab the mail. I went and the only thing I could find was one single envelope. A familiar man called me back saying he thought I left something in our mailbox. I reached in and pulled out a huge envelope but I couldn’t tell what was in it.

I brought the envelopes up to my mom. She opened the first one and found our first super expensive rent bill. She then walked into her room, saying she couldn’t handle to open the other one.

Paragraph 1：

I looked at the envelope and saw this: Dear Angela and Family. Love, Your Friend.

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Paragraph 2：

I had a feeling all of a sudden that I knew who had sent it.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1：

I looked at the envelope and saw this: Dear Angela and Family. Love, Your Friend. I brought it to my mom with shaking hands and asked her to open it. She tore it open and looked inside, tears streaming down her face. She emptied the contents onto the bed. There before my eyes were countless checks addressed to my mom. I stood still, shocked and puzzled.

Paragraph 2：

I had a feeling all of a sudden that I knew who had sent it. Somehow I didn’t want to tell my morn, thinking that she wouldn’t believe me. Then an idea came to me. The next night, we went to eat at the soup kitchen, where the strange and familiar man just came into my sight. I told my mom that he was the very sender and man I had come across that night. Full of gratitude, my mom went up to him.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，文章主要講述了作者小時候家境貧窮而每周四去救濟站充饑，一天一個陌生男子問了她的姓名，回家途中媽媽傷心地告訴她，奶奶過世了，房租又上漲了。進入公寓前，作者去收發(fā)室取了一個郵件，一個熟悉的聲音告訴她郵箱里還有一樣東西，于是她又取回一個信封并交給母親。第一個信封里是租金賬單，而第二個信封里卻放著許多支票，母子感動地哭起來。只有作者知道救助他們的恩人是誰，第二天帶著媽媽去感謝這個男人。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：我看了看信封，上面寫著：親愛的Angela和家人。愛你的朋友。所以后文應該是講述作者打開信封后的事情，信封里是寄給作者母親的支票，作者對此感到震驚和困惑；第二段開頭是：我突然有一種感覺，我知道是誰寄的了。本段應該寫作者帶著媽媽去找到那個寄信的人，想要感謝他的事情。

最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右。