Question

假設你是校學生會成員李華，為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)和解決同學們中存在的學習壓力問題，學生會以How to Deal With Study Pressure為主題于上周采訪了200名高二的學生。請你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結果寫一份報告，并談談自己或身邊的同學釋放壓力的有效方法。

聽音樂: 35% 做運動：40%

向同學或朋友傾訴：15% 向老師或父母傾訴：10%

參考詞匯： 釋放 release

注意：1 詞數(shù)：120個左右

2 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Nowadays, more and more Senior Three students are getting stressed in their studies. In order to find some effective ways to release their stress, a survey was carried out last week. Altogether, 200 students were interviewed, and the results are as follows.

About 40% of the students let out their stress by doing sports. They play football, go for a swim, or play ping-pong, for instance. Meanwhile, another 35 of the students release their stress by listening to different kinds of music. About 15% of them like to tell their problems to their classmates or friends. They feel much better after having a talk with them. Only 10% of the students choose to discuss their problems with their parents or teachers.

I’m always under pressure, too. I think a conversation with our parents or teachers is helpful, and that taking exercise can help us to relax when we are under pressure.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)調(diào)查結果寫一份報告，并談談釋放壓力的有效方法。詞數(shù)在120詞左右；不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

范文詳細描述了調(diào)查的結果，并進行了適當?shù)耐卣梗环段倪�使用了賓語從句、時間狀語從句等語法知識，具備較強的語言運用能力。

語法方面：賓語從句that taking exercise can help us to relax；時間狀語從句when we are under pressure等，具備一定的語法功底，也使作文句式多樣；

搭配方面：more and more, in order to, carry out, let out, for instance, choose to do等，范文使用了較多的短語和搭配，使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實；

篇章結構方面：范文注意使用altogether, and, meanwhile, too等詞來銜接句子和段落，使語句通順、銜接緊密；也使表達變得更有條理。

考點：材料作文