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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Last week I went to a movie，which was very touched. It was a sad movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a little boy，his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich family who had no child. The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became doctor. In his hospital, he had a patient，who was an old lady. He did care too much about her，for she could hardly afford for the medical care. One evening, the lady died quietly of a serious illness but on her bed the doctor found a letter, in it he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great mother. He wanted to call her mother，but it was too late. Everybody in the theatre were moved to tears.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】作者講述了一個講述母子真情的電影，這部電影感人至深。

1.touched→touching.考查形容詞。touched“受感動的”修飾人，touching “動人的”修飾物。此處修飾電影用touching，故touched →touching.

2.sons→son.考查名詞。根據(jù)下文the child was a little boy可知電影講述的事母親和一個兒子的故事，用單數(shù)，故sons→son.

3.very→so.考查固定句型。此處是so… that句型，表示“如此……以至于”，故very→so.

4.late→later.考查副詞。late“晚，遲”，later“后來，隨后”。此處表示20年后用later，故late→later.

5.doctor前加a.考查冠詞。句中doctor是單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞，此處表示成了一名醫(yī)生，用冠詞a，故doctor前加a.

6.did→didn’t或did后加not.考查句意。此處指因為老人負(fù)擔(dān)不起醫(yī)療費(fèi)，所以他沒有太多關(guān)心老人。表示“沒有”用否定形式，故did→didn’t或did后加not.

7.去掉for.考查及物動詞。afford “負(fù)擔(dān)得起”是及物動詞，后面直接加賓語不加介詞。故去掉for.

8.but→and.考查連詞。句意：一天晚上老人由于疾病安靜地去世了，在她床上醫(yī)生發(fā)現(xiàn)了一封信。前后句是并列故選不是轉(zhuǎn)折，故but→and.

9.it→which.考查關(guān)系代詞。句中包含定語從句，先行詞是a letter指物，在定語從句中作狀語，指“在信中”用介詞in+ which或where引導(dǎo)，故it→which.

10.were→was.考查主謂一致。句中主語是不定代詞Everybody是單數(shù)，謂語動詞與之一致也用單數(shù)，故were→was.