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19．你身邊很多同學(xué)視力低下，需戴近視眼鏡．請(qǐng)就這一現(xiàn)象寫一篇英語課前演講稿，內(nèi)容包括以下方面：1．目前同學(xué)的視力狀況    2．青少年視力低下的主要原因     3．保護(hù)視力的建議
注意：
   1．詞數(shù)120左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
   2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：vision視力        short-sighted 近視眼（的）
Dear classmates，have you noticed the phenomenon that                                                   
Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你身邊很多同學(xué)視力低下，需戴近視眼鏡．請(qǐng)就這一現(xiàn)象寫一篇英語課前演講稿，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：目前同學(xué)的視力狀況    青少年視力低下的主要原因     保護(hù)視力的建議2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：get a good habit of 養(yǎng)成一個(gè)好的習(xí)慣；play computer games玩電腦游戲；however然而；Secondly其次；In addition另外；
This is because they don't get a good habit of reading or they overuse their eyes watching TV or playing computer games．（高分句型一）
Having a distant look at intervals during the class break is equally important．（高分句型二）
 It is high time that we took quick actions to protect our vision!（高分句型三）

解答 Dear classmates，
       Have you noticed the phenomena that more and more teenagers around us wear glasses？Some of them got short-sighted even at a very young age．This is because they don't get a good habit of reading or they overuse their eyes watching TV or playing computer games．（高分句型一）
       But how to protect our vision？What can we do for good eyesight？Perhaps there are some ways for me to keep good vision．However，taking regular outdoor activities is an evident solution．Secondly，eye-care exercises twice a day may not be neglected．Having a distant look at intervals during the class break is equally important．（高分句型二）In addition，don't read in light which is either too dim or too bright．Don't read in the bed or in a moving car．
       It is high time that we took quick actions to protect our vision!（高分句型三）
       Thank you for listening!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．