Question

20．以"Form a Good Habit"為題，談談早起的好處．要求言之有理，內(nèi)容連貫，可參考以下提示：
1．有些學生遲到，是因 為晚起；
2．晚起不僅影響學習，而且也是一種壞習慣； 
3．早起是一種好習慣，因為它能給你帶來很多好處．早起有助于身體健康，有助于學習，有助于品德培養(yǎng)．希望大家養(yǎng)成早起的習慣（注：品德培養(yǎng) train character）

Answer 1

分析 點明這是一篇關于早起好處的作文，根據(jù)題目要求可知，用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，內(nèi)容包括：一好習慣的好處；二點明主題；三晚起的影響；四早起帶來很多好處；五總結語．
高分句型：
1．However，no one can deny the fact that some students are often late for class，because of  getting up late．句子里the fact后的 that從句是同位語從句，表示事實的內(nèi)容．
可是沒人能夠否認這個事實，一些學生猶豫起床晚而上課遲到．
2．Getting up early is a good habit，which can benefit you a lot．句子里Getting up early 做主語，謂語動詞一第三人稱單數(shù)；which引導非限制性定語從句，代指先行詞 a good habit．
早起是一個好習慣，它會使你受益良多．

解答 It is universally acknowledged that good habits are indispensable to us，for it does good to our life．（好習慣的好處） As a senior high school student，we should get into a good habit of getting up early．（點明主題）Because with a happy mood and clear head，we in turn make progress in our study．However，no one can deny the fact that some students are often late for class，because of  getting up late．【高分句型一】Getting up late not only affects their studies but also is a bad habit．（（晚起的影響）
Getting up early is a good habit，which can benefit you a lot．【高分句型二】For one thing，getting up early，after all，helps you to be healthy．The fresh air in the morning makes you think more quickly than any other time of the day．what's more，you can memorize what you have learned easily．For another，getting up early can also help you to train your character．Some students can get up early，but some can not．This needs perseverance..An old saying goes in English，"Early to bed，and early to rise makes a man healthy，wealthy and wise．"This is very true．，（早起帶來很多好處）
I sincerely hope everyone will form the good habit of getting up early．Only in this way can we study  much more better．（總結語）

點評 考查提綱類作文．
寫作完成以后要通讀全文，檢查內(nèi)容是否符合要求，要點是否齊全，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否合乎要求．最主要的是要檢查句子是否符合英語習慣，句型是否正確，語法是否正確（包括句子結構、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致等），檢查單詞是否誤寫、少寫，習語搭配是否得當?shù)龋�以及字母大小寫、標點符號是否正確等，這就要求考生在定稿認真檢查，仔細核對，及時發(fā)現(xiàn)并改正問題，保證要點齊全，句子完整通順，力爭減少失誤．