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【題目】最近朋友圈都被大新津美麗的藍天白云美圖刷爆了。新津縣被譽為“成都的后花園”，是一個你來了就想住下來的地方，請根據(jù)以下要點以 “My Hometown”為題介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)——新津縣。

1、地處四川盆地西部，距成都市區(qū)以南28公里，人口30多萬，面積330平方公里。

2、歷史悠久，具有1450多年的歷史，是川西重要的物資集散地和交通樞紐。

3、氣候四季宜人，冬無嚴寒，夏無酷暑。

4、人居環(huán)境優(yōu)美，五河匯聚，河鮮美食享譽全國，有寶墩遺址，觀音寺、純陽觀、老君山等文物古跡。

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①微信朋友圈 WeChat Moments；刷爆：overwhelm/max out/fill； 四川盆地Sichuan Basin；物資集散地 goods distribution center；交通樞紐 transportation hub；河鮮live river fish；遺址 site；后花園 backyard。

②字數(shù)：120字左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】My Hometown

Recently, WeChat Moments have been overwhelmed by the beauty of the blue sky and white clouds of Xinjin. Xinjin, my hometown, honored as “the backyard of Chengdu”, is a place where you want to settle down once you come.

Located in the west of Sichuan Basin, about 28 kilometres south of the city of Chengdu, Xinjin has a population of about 300,000 and covers an area of 330 square kilometres. As a county with a history of over 1,450 years, it is of great importance as a goods distribution centre and transportation hub in west Sichuan.

Neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer, the climate in Xinjin is pleasant all the year round. With 5 rivers joining together here, Xinjin, which is also rich in live river fish and other delicious foods renowned throughout the country, provides us with a good environment to live in.

Beautiful and habitable, Xinjin has many places of interest as well, such as the prehistoric ancient city site- Baodun Site, Guanyin Temple, Chunyang Temple, and Laojun Mountain, attracting tourists all over the world.

Welcome to my hometown-Xinjin.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，文章要點已經(jīng)給出，在寫這篇文章時要注意以下幾點：

1.整篇文章時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。

2.要點要齊全，但是不要進行簡單的羅列，可以采用適當?shù)倪B接詞，或者是表遞進關(guān)系的副詞如 As a county with 使上下文銜接自然，行文自然流暢。

3.注意語氣，此文是寫介紹信的英語短文，所以語氣上應(yīng)該比較誠懇，不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)過多的強硬語氣的詞語。

4.此作文要分四個部分寫，每個部分要更完整，最好用簡單句與復(fù)合句結(jié)合的方法寫作如Located in the west of Sichuan Basin, about 28 kilometres south of the city of Chengdu, Xinjin has a population of about 300,000 and covers an area of 330 square kilometres.

5.多采用一些高級句型，如 it is of great importance as a goods distribution centre and transportation hub in west Sichuan.同時使用一些詞組如 the beauty of ，settle down ，be located in，as well，such as， As a county with，too...to等。

【范文亮點】

提綱性文章難點：提綱性文章難點：擴充成句，因為提綱性文章主題內(nèi)容已經(jīng)基本列出，在將短句擴充時，要精煉。其中要注意盡量用高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句是來表達，如強調(diào)句，定語從句等，就如文中 With 5 rivers joining together here, Xinjin, which is also rich in live river fish and other delicious foods renowned throughout the country, provides us with a good environment to live in.使用的是定語從句。再者就是要多使用一些高級詞匯與詞組，如the beauty of ，settle down ，be located in，as well，such as， As a county with，too...to等。最后就是要段落清新，層次分明。就像文中要多使用一些連接詞語使銜接自然。