Question

8．假如你是新華中學學生會主席李華，學校安排你給即將到你校任教的外籍教師Peter 推薦一名學生助手（assistant）．請根據(jù)以下要點給他寫封推薦信：
1．歡迎Peter的到來；
2．推薦韓梅為學生助手；
3．韓梅的基本情況（16歲，高一學生，學校十佳學生之一）：
4．韓梅的優(yōu)勢（電腦技術、溝通能力、英語水平等）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100左右：
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
I'm Li Hua，Chairman of the students'Union of Xinhua Middle School．It's great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester．
I was asked to write to you to recommend Han Mei，a Senior 1 student of 16，to be your assistant．Han Mei is a diligent girl，who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others．What's more，she is one of the top ten students in our school，and her spoken English is extremely excellent．I'm sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China．If you have any questions about it，please contact me．
I'm looking forward to your coming．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封推薦信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一自我介紹，歡迎對方的到來；二推薦韓梅為學生助手，介紹她的基本情況和優(yōu)勢；三如果有問題，對方可以聯(lián)系；四盼著對方的到來．
高分句型：
1．It's great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester．句子里，It做形式主語，代指動詞不定式to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester； that 引導賓語從句you are going to teach in our school next semester．
很高興聽說你下學期要來我們學校教學．
2．Han Mei is a diligent girl，who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others．句子里who引導非限制性定語從句，代指先行詞a diligent girl；has a gift for 表示"有做某事的天賦"；communicating with 表示"和…交流"．
韓梅是一個聰明的女孩，她的電腦技術熟練，天生有良好的溝通能力．

解答 One possible version：
Dear Peter，
    I'm Li Hua，Chairman of the students'Union of Xinhua Middle School．It's great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester．【高分句型一】（自我介紹，歡迎對方的到來）
     I was asked to write to you to recommend Han Mei，a Senior 1 student of 16，to be your assistant．Han Mei is a diligent girl，who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others．【高分句型二】What's more，she is one of the top ten students in our school，and her spoken English is extremely excellent．（推薦韓梅為學生助手，介紹她的基本情況和優(yōu)勢）
         I'm sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China．If you have any questions about it，please contact me．（如果有問題，對方可以聯(lián)系）
         I'm looking forward to your coming．（盼著對方的到來）
                                                                                   Yours sincerely，
                                                                                     Li Hua

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