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2．請你根據(jù)提示并結(jié)合生活中的一個事例，就"包容"這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文．
There's no denying that forgiveness  is  a noble quality．With forgiveness people will live in a harmonious way； with forgiveness，people can overcome any difficulty； with forgiveness，…
注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語，
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個事例；
④文中不得透漏個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
⑤詞數(shù)為120左右．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
Forgiveness is what I learned from my teacher，which has had a great influence on my growth
寬恕是我從老師那里學(xué)到的，它對我的成長有很大的影響．
高分句型二：
It was forgiveness rather than punishment that changed Tom．
是原諒而不是懲罰改變了湯姆．

解答 Forgiveness is what I learned from my teacher，which has had a great influence on my growth（高分句型一）．
     Two years ago，I，together with Tom who was regarded as the best basketball player in my class，took part in the basketball final of our school on behalf of our class．With only 20 seconds left，our team still took a lead by two points．To our delight，the ball was in Tom's hand!Had Tom passed it in time，we would certainly have won．But Tom chose to break through．Suddenly，our rival stole the ball，and shot a three-pointer!After the match，we all demanded the teacher fire Tom．But our teacher told us to forgive him，saying forgiveness was a good medicine for some diseases．After that，Tom did learn the importance of good teamwork．
     It was forgiveness rather than punishment that changed Tom（高分句型二）．

點評 本書面表達(dá)為議論文，議論文是對某現(xiàn)象或觀點進(jìn)行點評．寫作時，應(yīng)注意按提出、分析、解決問題的邏輯順序來安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用足夠的論據(jù)來分層次論證自己的觀點．