Question

11．Responsibility is one of the most treasured traditional values in China．The children are taught to be responsible when they are very young．At schools，the students are also instructed to be responsible．
In fact，responsibility can be understood in many ways．For parents，they have had the responsibility for caring for and fostering their children since the birth of their babies； for teachers，both in kindergartens and colleges，they also should be responsible for the study and life of their students，that is to say，teachers are the second parents of children to some extent； for us，to promote a better relationship with our friends，we bear the responsibility for helping our friends when they are in trouble or faced with difficulties．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個詞就"責(zé)任心"談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）責(zé)任心的重要性，并舉例說明缺乏責(zé)任心的影響．
（2）你認(rèn)為該如何做一個有責(zé)任心的中學(xué)生？
注意：
1．可以用自己親身的經(jīng)歷、虛構(gòu)的故事或生活中的事例，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名．

Answer 1

分析 本文為讀寫任務(wù)作文．
寫作主題為：責(zé)任心
文段通過家庭責(zé)任，學(xué)校責(zé)任，個人的責(zé)任來說明"責(zé)任心"是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)價值觀之一．
寫作要點為：1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個詞就"責(zé)任心"談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）責(zé)任心的重要性，并舉例說明缺乏責(zé)任心的影響．
（2）你認(rèn)為該如何做一個有責(zé)任心的中學(xué)生？

解答 The passage mainly tells us that we Chinese put high value on responsibility and that people have different responsibility depending on their roles．
Responsibility is essential to our life．Being responsible，you will gain many precious things，such as true love．Without responsibility，however，you'll be an annoyance and can't achieve what you desire．For example，some students don't work hard or even skip classes．Worse still，some are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet，which has negative effects on their study．
As students，we ought to be responsible for whatever we do．Above all，great efforts should be made to improve our study and repay the love and care of our parents and teachers．Besides，we must develop a strong sense of responsibility，such as helping others in trouble．Only when we are responsible will we be respected and loved by others．（150words）

點評 考生需根據(jù)所提供的信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．