Question

1．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
   Last summer vacation，my parents and I go to the countryside to visit my uncle．It took us three hour to get there by car．After having lunch on my uncle's，we went fishing in the river near her house．I was very exciting because I caught a lot of fish there．The next day，we decided to ride bikes around village．The village was very beautiful but we were very relaxed．Then we had a picnic in a park that many children were flying kites．The country life was very peacefully．I hope that I can go to there again next year．

Answer 1

分析 本文作者主要介紹了去年暑假，自己與父母一起到鄉(xiāng)下的叔叔家里度假的情況．

解答 Last summer vacation，my parents and I goto the countryside to visit my uncle．
It took us three hour to get there by car．After having lunchonmy uncle's，we
went fishing in the river near her house．I was very exciting because I caught a lot
of fish there．The next day，we decided to ride bikes around∧village．The village
was very beautiful butwe were very relaxed．Then we had a picnic in a parkthat
many children were flying kites．The country life was very peacefully．I hope that
I can goto there again next year．
詳解：
1．go改為went    考查時態(tài)    根據(jù)時間狀語"Last summer vacation"可知，此處指的是發(fā)生在去年暑假的事情，應(yīng)使用一般過去時，故用went．
2．hour改為hours   考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)   此處指的是三個小時，由于hour是可數(shù)名詞，故用hours．
3．on改為at   考查固定搭配   at one's （home/house）意為：在某人的家里，此處指的是在我叔叔家里；故用at．
4．her改為his  考查人稱代詞的一致性    此處用來修飾名詞house，指的是作者叔叔的家，故用his．
5．exciting改為excited  考查過去分詞  此處用在系動詞was之后作表語，說明的是主語I（指人）的心情，故用由過去分詞轉(zhuǎn)化來的形容詞excited．
6．village前加the   考查定冠詞   此處用來修飾名詞village，表示特指作者叔叔所在的村莊，故在village前加the．  
7．but改為and  考查句意理解以及連詞   本句的意思是：村子很漂亮，我們很放松；此處表示并列關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用連詞and．
8．that改為where   考查關(guān)系副詞   本句為定語從句；先行詞是a park，由于該從句中缺少地點狀語"in a park"，故用關(guān)系副詞where．
9．peacefully改為peaceful  考查形容詞   此處用在系動詞was之后作表語，故用形容詞peaceful．
10．去掉 to    考查介詞   由于there是副詞，所以它的前面不能用介詞，故去掉go之后的to．

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