Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏子符號（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Time flies! This is a third year that I have been in this school. In the past two and a half years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me best was an activity called “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for so a long time, we were so happy to go to the countryside. After divided into three groups, we started to work. Some students cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole, put the earth back and push them down hard. We continued doing that until all the work was done. Although we were exhausted, but we felt fulfilled on our way back home.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】…a third year … a改為the

【2】… had organized many activities… had 改為has

【3】… impressed me best … best 改為most

【4】In an autumn afternoon… In改為On

【5】…a farm which we learned … which改為where；或在which前面加on

【6】…so a long time… so改為such

【7】After divided into … divided 改為being divided

【8】… into the hole… hole改為holes

【9】…push them down … them改為it

【10】 …. but we felt … but去掉

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于記敘文，介紹了在校期間參加的一項名為“Learning to Farm”的活動。

【1】…a third year … a改為the

考查定冠詞用法。英語中在序數(shù)詞或者由序數(shù)詞修飾的名詞前面通常使用定冠詞the表示特指，所以本句在third的前面加the。

【2】… had organized many activities… had 改為has

考查時態(tài)。本句的時間狀語是in the past two and half years，該結(jié)構(gòu)通常和現(xiàn)在完成時連用，所以本句使用現(xiàn)在完成時的時態(tài)。

【3】… impressed me best … best 改為most

考查最高級。本句中most表示程度“最”，句意：給我們留下最深刻印象的是一個被稱為“Learning to Farm”的活動。

【4】In an autumn afternoon… In改為On

考查介詞。英語中具體到某一天的早晨、下午，要使用介詞on，泛指在早晨下午時，要使用介詞in。

【5】…a farm which we learned … which改為where；或在which前面加on

考查定語從句。本題定語從句的先行詞是a farm，后面的定語從句結(jié)構(gòu)很完整，所以使用關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)這個定語從句，并在句中做地點狀語。

【6】…so a long time… so改為such

考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。在名詞或者名詞短語的前面要使用such修飾，而so通常修飾形容詞或副詞。本句中“a long time”是一個名詞短語，要使用such修飾。

【7】After divided into … divided 改為being divided

考動名詞。本句主語we與動詞divide構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系，而在介詞after的后面要使用動名詞形式，所以使用動名詞被動語態(tài)being divided表示被動語態(tài)。

【8】… into the hole… hole改為holes

考查上下文串聯(lián)。根據(jù)上句“some dug holes”可知一些人挖了一些洞，另外一些人把土豆塊放在這些洞里。所以復(fù)數(shù)形式holes。

【9】…push them down … them改為it

考查代詞。本句中使用代詞it指代不可數(shù)名詞the earth，而them通常指代可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【10】 …. but we felt … but去掉

考查連詞。連詞although和but是不能連用的，本句although放在句首，首字母大寫了，所以只能去除but。