Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Last weekend, Tom and I paid a visit to the Summer Palace, that proved to be very interesting and rewarding.

We arrived at the entrance early in the morning and I introduced the history of the park for Tom briefly. The moment we entered the park, Tom attracted by the beautiful scenery and we walked along the beautiful lake happily. Soon, we noticed the elderly man practicing calligraphy on the ground, with a bucket of water aside. Held a big writing brush in his hand, he wrote the Chinese character for “l(fā)ongevity”. As well as other tourists, we couldn’t help but admiring his skills.

To our surprise, the elderly man invited Tom to have a try. With his help, Tom completed his first calligraphy task, the two Chinese character for “China”, quite successful. Before we left, we took a photo together to memorize this a valuable experience. In the picture, Tom held the writing brush and the elderly man smiled, with his thumb up.

I was such glad that I could help my foreign friend to learn about the art of the language we have been using for several thousand years. In addition, I rediscovered the charm of Chinese culture.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】that→which

【2】for→to

【3】attracted前面加was

【4】the→an

【5】Held→Holding

【6】admiring→admire

【7】character→characters

【8】successful→successfully

【9】this后面的a去掉

【10】such→so

【解析】

【1】分析句子，可知是非限制性定語從句，先行詞是前面的句子Tom and I paid a visit to the Summer Palace，故要用which作為關(guān)系詞。

【2】introduce sth. to sb.介紹某物給某人，介詞用to，故要把for改為to。

【3】Tom是被吸引，所以要用被動語態(tài)，故在attracted前加was。

【4】elderly man是頭一次提到，所以不能用定冠詞，要用不定冠詞。

【5】本句的邏輯主語是he，與hold是主謂關(guān)系，故要用現(xiàn)在分詞，不是過去分詞。

【6】couldn’t help but do sth.不得不做某事，這里是指不得不佩服他的技巧；如果結(jié)構(gòu)中沒有but，則help后面的動詞用動名詞形式。

【7】前面有數(shù)詞two，故名詞要用復數(shù)。

【8】quite successful在此作狀語，修飾句子的動詞completed，所以successful要用副詞形式。

【9】句中已經(jīng)有指示代詞this，指示代詞與不定冠詞不能連用，根據(jù)句意是表示“這次經(jīng)歷”，所以要去掉a。

【10】這里修飾的是形容詞，故要用so，構(gòu)成so...that...句型。