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2．第二節(jié)：書面表達(dá)
人生在世，犯錯在所難免，關(guān)鍵是對待錯誤的態(tài)度．請以"Learn From Mistakes"為題，根據(jù)以
下要求寫一篇100-120字的短文．
1．簡要闡述人們對待錯誤的態(tài)度；
2．談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒄埮e例說明．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料，以"Learn From Mistakes"為題寫一篇短文．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．簡要闡述人們對待錯誤的態(tài)度；2．談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒄埮e例說明．寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語：vary from person to person  （因人而異），make fulluse of （充分利用），on the contrary （相反），learn from sth  （像…學(xué)習(xí)），take sth forexample （舉…為例），face up to sth （面臨，面對），accumulateexperience （積累經(jīng)驗(yàn)），succeed in doing（成功做某事），There is no shame in doing （做…沒有羞恥）．

解答 We，human beings，are not always correct in our life．Itis normal for us to make mistakes at one time of another．（開頭）
Despite the fact that we all make mistake，what countsmost is the altitudes towards them，which vary from person to person．【高分句型】Some people areclever enough to make full use of the experiences and avoid the same mistakesnext time．On the contrary，others might just ignore the consequences of theirmistakes and go farther and farther on the wrong path．（闡述人們對待錯誤的態(tài)度）
In my opinion，there is no shame in making mistakes．Whatwe need to do is to recognize out mistakes and learn from them..【高分句型】Take ThomasEdison for example，he made many mistakes and experienced lots of failure whileexperimenting with different materials for the light bulb．But he was braveenough to face up to them and accumulated some beneficial experience．Eventually，he succeeded in finding the most suitable material．From thisexample，we can learn that no one is perfect and learning from mistakes canmake us wiser that before．（談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⑴e例說明）

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．