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18．假定你是李華，英國一個(gè)學(xué)生代表團(tuán)將來你校進(jìn)行訪問，你們計(jì)劃舉辦一個(gè)聯(lián)歡會(huì)（a get together），請(qǐng)向?qū)Ψ截?fù)責(zé)人Jack寫信，告知聯(lián)歡會(huì)活動(dòng)安排，并征求對(duì)方意見．聯(lián)歡會(huì)活動(dòng)安排如下：
（1）中國學(xué)生表演節(jié)目
（2）英國學(xué)生表演節(jié)目
（3）中英兩國學(xué)生共同參與一個(gè)節(jié)目或活動(dòng)．（詢問有何建議）
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jack，
We feel very honored  that we will have you here as our guestsNow I'd like to inform you of some of our arrangements for your visit and ask for your opinions of them．
We are going to have a get together at which performances will be given．（高分句型一）Of course，we Chinese students will perform some Chinese dances and music，but we don't think the get-together will be complete without your taking part．（高分句型二）So，would you mind giving some performances，too？Further more．we think there should be a performance or an activity in which both Chinese students and British students will act together．（高分句型三）What do you think of the idea？I wonder if you could make some suggestions．
I'm looking forward to your early reply．Yours，
Li  Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息向?qū)Ψ截?fù)責(zé)人Jack寫信，告知聯(lián)歡會(huì)活動(dòng)安排，并征求對(duì)方意見，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：（1）中國學(xué)生表演節(jié)目（2）英國學(xué)生表演節(jié)目（3）中英兩國學(xué)生共同參與一個(gè)節(jié)目或活動(dòng)．（詢問有何建議）2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
We are going to have a get together at which performances will be given．（高分句型一）句中帶有介詞+which引導(dǎo)的定語從句
Of course，we Chinese students will perform some Chinese dances and music，but we don't think the get-together will be complete without your taking part．（高分句型二）句中Chinese students作we的同位語
Further more．we think there should be a performance or an activity in which both Chinese students and British students will act together．（高分句型三）句中帶有介詞+which引導(dǎo)的定語從句

解答 Dear Jack，
     We feel very honored that we will have you here as our guests．Now I'd like to inform you of some of our arrangements for your visit and ask for your opinions of them．
      We are going to have a get together at which performances will be given．（高分句型一）Of course，we Chinese students will perform some Chinese dances and music，but we don't think the get-together will be complete without your taking part．（高分句型二）So，would you mind giving some performances，too？Further more．we think there should be a performance or an activity in which both Chinese students and British students will act together．（高分句型三）What do you think of the idea？I wonder if you could make some suggestions．
      I'm looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li  Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．