Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(—)，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

My brother, he would do some paperwork in a company, went to a remote village to participate the voluntary activity last month. So my mother was worried about that he could adjust himself to living there. She was dying to hearing from him. Later he told my mother he had fitted in well with the villagers there. However, he told them that a terrible accident had happened. The other day he, who was scared to dead, was about to attend a party while he witnessed it. Worse still, the car fled from the scene. Firstly he called, urged the doctors to rush to the spot and then he gave first aid to the injured. Eventually the injured man was lucky helped out of danger.

I am proud of him, who is occupying himself with his work and devotes himself to helping those in the need.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】he-who

【2】加in

【3】that-whether

【4】hearing-hear

【5】them-us

【6】dead-death

【7】while-when

【8】urged-urging

【9】lucky-luckily

【10】去掉the

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述的是我的哥哥在山村參加的一次志愿活動(dòng)。他輕松地適應(yīng)了山區(qū)的艱苦生活，在一次去參加酒席的路上，他碰到一位車禍中受傷的人，經(jīng)過他的全力救治，那位傷者幸存下來了，我為有這樣一位樂于奉獻(xiàn)的哥哥感到驕傲。

【1】he-who 考查定語從句。My brother,who would do some paperwork in a company, went to a remote……，原本在一家公司工作的哥哥去參加志愿者活動(dòng)了。這里修飾人的定語從句要用who。故改為who。

【2】加in 考查固定短語。Participate in the voluntary activity last month.參加志愿者活動(dòng)。Participate in意為參加。故加in。

【3】that-whether 考查賓語從句。So my mother was worried about whether he could adjust himself to living there.我的媽媽擔(dān)心他能否適應(yīng)那里的生活。Worry about +whether賓語從句，意為擔(dān)心……怎么樣。故改為whether。

【4】hearing-hear 考查不定式用法。She was dying to hear from him.我媽媽渴望收到他的來信。Be dying to do sth渴望做某事。To后面接動(dòng)詞原形，故改為hear。

【5】them-us 考查賓格形式。However, he told them that a terrible accident had happened.然而他告訴了我們一個(gè)可怕的意外�！拔覀儭钡馁e格是us.故改為us。

【6】dead-death 考查固定搭配。The other day he, who was scared to death，be scared to death嚇得要死，故改為death。

【7】while-when 考查時(shí)間狀語。The other day he, who was scared to death, was about to attend a party when he witnessed it.一天當(dāng)他去參加酒席當(dāng)他看到了一場嚴(yán)重的車禍，嚇得要死。While表示兩個(gè)動(dòng)作同時(shí)進(jìn)行，when表示時(shí)間狀語。故改為when。

【8】urged-urging 考查獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)。Firstly he called, urging the doctors to rush to the spot and then he gave first aid to the injured.他第一時(shí)間給救護(hù)車打電話，然后救治來了傷者。主語都是“he”,在第二個(gè)句子里可以省略主語，如果動(dòng)詞與主語是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，把謂語動(dòng)詞改為ing形式。故改為urging。

【9】lucky-luckily 考查副詞。eventually the injured man was lucky helped out of danger.最后傷者幸運(yùn)脫險(xiǎn)。用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，用luckily修飾was helped out,故改為luckily。

【10】去掉the 考查固定短語。in need意為在危急時(shí)刻，需要幫助的。故去掉the。