Question

11．假如你是英國的Mike，你的朋友李華打算到國外留學(xué)，他寫信詢問你什么樣的中國學(xué)生最受國外高校青睞．請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給對方寫一封回信：
1．語言是道硬門檻；
2．適應(yīng)能力很重要；
3．興趣愛好被看重；
4．要有社會責(zé)任感．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．開頭和結(jié)束語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（點(diǎn)明書信的主題）
As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．【高分句型一】Besides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．【高分句型二】Last but not least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed．（簡述什么樣的中國學(xué)生最受國外高校青睞）
This is some of my advice，and I hope it can be of some help to you．May you succeed!Best wishes and good luck．（表示祝愿）
Yours，
Mike
Yours，
Mike．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封關(guān)于什么樣的中國學(xué)生最受國外高校青睞話題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明書信的主題；二簡述什么樣的中國學(xué)生最受國外高校青睞；三表示祝愿．
高分句型：
1．As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．句子里As far as I know引導(dǎo)的狀語從句，表示"據(jù)我所知"；which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，代指主句提到的這一件事．
據(jù)我所知，語言能力是必要的，好的語言能力會有助于你和其他人交流，使你更容易的理解課程．
2．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．句子里for表示（因?yàn)椋┮龑?dǎo)的并列句．
此外，你的興趣是會被看重的，因?yàn)樗�和你的成功有關(guān)系．

解答 【答案】
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities．（點(diǎn)明書信的主題）
As far as I know，the language ability is essential，which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses．【高分句型一】Besides，you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment．What's more，your interest is valued as well，for it has a lot to do with success．【高分句型二】Last but not least，those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed．（簡述什么樣的中國學(xué)生最受國外高校青睞）
This is some of my advice，and I hope it can be of some help to you．May you succeed!Best wishes and good luck．（表示祝愿）
Yours，
Mike

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類書信．
本文采用三段式，語言簡練，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，要點(diǎn)明確，布局合理，運(yùn)用高級句子．I'm glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter．使用賓語從句；those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed．定語從句和被動語態(tài)在句中同時出現(xiàn)；May you succeed!運(yùn)用巧妙；另外，Besides，What's more，Last but not least，的運(yùn)用為文章增光．