Question

【題目】假如你是大學(xué)一年級(jí)新生李華。開(kāi)學(xué)之初，你的英語(yǔ)老師Ms Li希望了解每位同學(xué)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)建議。請(qǐng)按以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封信。

1.對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)；

2.自己目前的英語(yǔ)水平；

3.自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問(wèn)題；

4.對(duì)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

Dear Ms Li,

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.

Thank you!

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Ms Li,

I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.

As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：本文考查建議信書(shū)面表達(dá)。除卻按照要求寫作文，還要注意一般信的格式，既然是教學(xué)建議,就要詳細(xì)介，英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中存在問(wèn)題，向老師提出合理化的學(xué)習(xí)建議,希望老師給以指導(dǎo)等情況。尊稱要得體。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：本文有了一般的書(shū)信格式，結(jié)構(gòu)清楚。運(yùn)用了一些比較好的短語(yǔ)，例如：a global village，get more and more important，feel nervous，give me good advice on, make much progress in English等，其句型也可謂是精彩紛呈，比如狀語(yǔ)從句的使用：As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important；表語(yǔ)從句的使用: the two main problems in my study are that I；賓語(yǔ)從句的使用：I really hope that you can；一些連詞的使用使得句子間通順流暢，如so，and,等。