17．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I will share one experience with you．With the college Entrance Examination draw near，I was

filled with great anxiety．However，I couldn't be absorbed in study，resulting from my failing in the

examination．I got very discouraging．Just then，my teacher，Miss Zhang，approached me and said，

"In life we all have moments when we can't achieve what we want to．It is natural．Don't allow

those moments to weaken you，and turn them into motivation to inspire yourself．"Her words were

reminder that provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life．Consequently，I gained

that I deserved．

So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all．It gives you the confidence to deal with

difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life．

分析 本文主要講述隨著高考的臨近，作者變得很焦慮，導(dǎo)致多次考試失�。詈�，在張老師的幫助下，作者認(rèn)識(shí)到要把壓力變成動(dòng)力，戰(zhàn)勝生活中的壓力．

解答 I will share one experience with you．With the college Entrance Examination draw near，I was
filled with great anxiety．However，I couldn't be absorbed in study，resulting from my failing in the
examination．I got very discouraging．Just then，my teacher，Miss Zhang，approached me and said，
"In life we all have moments when we can't achieve what we want to．It is natural．Don't allow
those moments to weaken you，and turn them into motivation to inspire yourself．"Her words were∧
reminder that provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life．Consequently，I gained
that I deserved．
So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all．It gives you the confidence to deal with
difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life．
詳解：
1．draw改為drawing 考查with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)．在此結(jié)構(gòu)中College Entrance Examination和draw是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，用drawing作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)． 
2．However改為T(mén)herefore  考查副詞．根據(jù)句意：馬上高考了，我很緊張．因此我不能專(zhuān)心學(xué)習(xí)．根據(jù)句意可知此處表結(jié)果，用Therefore．
3．from改為in  考查動(dòng)詞固定搭配．result in意為"導(dǎo)致"，result from意為"由…導(dǎo)致"，此處應(yīng)是：導(dǎo)致． 
4．discouraging改為discouraged．考查過(guò)去分詞．過(guò)去分詞作表語(yǔ)，多半用來(lái)表示人物所處的心理狀態(tài)或情感變化，其主語(yǔ)多半是人．discouraged意為"感到沮喪的，泄氣的"． 
5．去掉to 考查詞語(yǔ)用法．在賓語(yǔ)從句what we want中，want是及物動(dòng)詞，不用介詞to，to是多余的，要去掉． 
6．a(chǎn)nd改為but 考查連詞．此處上下文之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而不是順承關(guān)系，用連詞but． 
7．yourself改為you． 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：把它們變成激勵(lì)你的動(dòng)力．用代詞you．
8．加a 考查冠詞．reminder是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指． 
9．that改為what．考查代詞．賓語(yǔ)從句中deserve為及物動(dòng)詞，用what作其賓語(yǔ)，同時(shí)引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句． 
10．which改為that．考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句．英語(yǔ)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型：It is/was+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分（通常是主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)）+that/who（當(dāng)強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ)且主語(yǔ)指人）+其他部分．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書(shū)信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類(lèi)似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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（38）F And many Chinese computer users complain that their Internet speed is relatively slow when gamers try to go online．But despite all these，their passion for games does not seem to have been affected．
（39）C According to statistics from the organizers of WCG 2017China，there are 120million online gamers registered in China．And analysts predict that the number will reach 500million by the end of 2020．
So，are you ready to join in the fun？"I don't know which one to play，"you may say．Not to worry．（40）D There are so many kinds of games for you to choose from，including action，strategy，fighting and sports games．Visiting portal websites such as www．sina．com and www.163．com，you can easily subscribe to a whole load of online games．

A．They are just entertainment．
B．They may even bring you lots of new friends．
C．China now has one of the world's largest gamer populations．
D．It doesn't matter whether you are male or female，young or old．
E．Well，now you can simply enter cyberspace and choose your character．
F．There is much shorter history of computer gaming in China than in most western countries．
G．As computers become an absolute necessity in people's everyday lives，computer games began being key entertainment．

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7．Toddler World Nursery was delighted to employ a trainee-twenty-two-year-old Jonathan Brown-as their first male nursery schoolteacher．He was also the only man who applied for the job，but，insists Margery Bowman，head teacher of Toddler World，by far the best applicant．"Both boys and girls will benefit from the experience of having a male role in the nursery．"Says mother of two，Margery．
 Jonathan has always been interested in childcare．His own mother is a childminderand his father is a teacher．"I've always helped Mum with looking after all the children，"he says．"I'm used to changing nappies，feeding babies，reading stories and playing with Lego．"
But Jonathan is a rare male in a female world．Only 2% of nursery teachers are men and this hasn't changed for ten years．Roger Olsen of the National Nursery Trust said，"Men are often viewed with anxiety and suspicion in a children's environment．Or they are expected to do things the way women would do them．But men bring different things into childcare and this has to be recognized．"Jon athan agrees．He is a qualified under-7s football coach，and plans to introduce football lessons to the nursery for boys and girls．
What do Jonathan's friends think of his choice of career？
"Actually，most of them are pretty cool about it now，"he says，"though they do make jokes about nappies．And I've found that girls are actu ally quite impressed-so that's good!"

25．Why was Jonathan employed by Toddler World Nursery？A
A．He was the best among all the applicants．
B．He was the only man who applied for the job．
C．He would be able to teach kids to play football．
D．He could do things the way women would do them．
26．Which of the following can replace the underlined word"childminder"（ Para 2）？C
A．Instructor．
B．Superior．
C．Baby-sitter．
D．Coach．
27．What did Roger Olsen say about the job of childcare？D
A．It has been women specific．
B．It requires people's understanding．
C．It takes time to make some changes．
D．It needs men teachers to bring something different．

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