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7．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，想邀請(qǐng)來蘭州參加淘寶網(wǎng)甘肅館一周年慶祝活動(dòng)的阿里巴巴首席執(zhí)行官馬云來你校做一次成人禮的演講，請(qǐng)你給馬云首席寫一封邀請(qǐng)信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．說明寫信的目的；
2．說明演講的具體安排--時(shí)間：4月28日；地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂，主題：怎樣通過個(gè)人奮斗實(shí)現(xiàn)人生理想；
3．表達(dá)感謝與祝福．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：畢業(yè)典禮演講 adult ceremony speech
Dear Mayun，CEO of Ali Baba，
  My name is Li Hua．I'm a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School．May I have the honor to invite you to give us an adultceremony speech on behalf of all the teachers and students of our school？The speech is scheduled to be given on April，28 at the school hall，the theme of which will behow to realize our dreams through personal efforts． We are eager to hearyou talk about your own experiences and unique views． I sincerely hope youcan take your time from your busy schedule，and I would appreciate it very much if you can come．Thank you in advance andwish you all the best．
I am looking forward to receiving your reply at your earliestconvenience．
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封信，邀請(qǐng)來蘭州參加淘寶網(wǎng)甘肅館一周年慶�；顒�(dòng)的阿里巴巴首席執(zhí)行官馬云來校做一次成人禮的演講．
寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．說明寫信的目的； 2．說明演講的具體安排：時(shí)間：4月28日；地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂；主題：怎樣通過個(gè)人奮斗實(shí)現(xiàn)人生理想； 3．表達(dá)感謝與祝福． 寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱為主．
重要短語：invite sb to do sth（邀請(qǐng)某人做某事），on behalf of （代表），be scheduled to（預(yù)計(jì)，計(jì)劃做某事），realize our dreams （實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的夢(mèng)想），be eager to （渴望做某事），in advance （提前），adapt to （適應(yīng)）．
【高分句型】
1．The speech is scheduled to be given on April，28 at the school hall，the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams throughpersonal efforts．
這里是"介詞+which/who"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，具體結(jié)構(gòu)為"the+名詞+of which/who"，在從句中作主語．演講預(yù)定于4月28日在學(xué)校禮堂舉行，主題為"怎樣通過個(gè)人奮斗實(shí)現(xiàn)人生理想"．
2．I would appreciate it very much if you can come．
這是it作形式賓語用法，真正的賓語是if you can come．如果你能來我會(huì)很感激．

解答 Dear Mayun，CEO of Ali Baba，
My name isLi Hua．I'm a student from Xinhua High School． May I have the honor to invite you to give us an adultceremony speech on behalf of all the teachers and students of our school？（說明寫信的目的） The speech is scheduled to be given onApril，28 at the school hall，the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams throughpersonal efforts．【高分句型】We are eager to hear youtalk about your own experiences and unique views．（說明演講的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、主題）
I sincerely hope you can take your time from your busy schedule，and I would appreciate itvery much if you can come．【高分句型】Thank you in advance and wish you all the best．
I am looking forward to receiving your reply at your earliestconvenience．（表達(dá)感謝與祝福）
 
Yours sincerely 
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．