Question

假如你叫李華，你的一位美國留學(xué)生朋友Peter邀請(qǐng)你參加本周日在他家舉辦的生日聚會(huì)，但你不能參加，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫一封電子郵件：
表達(dá)想?yún)⒓拥囊庠?br />說明不能參加的理由（至少2個(gè)）
表示歉意并另約時(shí)間
注意：
詞數(shù)100左右；
可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；
開頭語已為你寫好。
Dear Peter
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday.
Best regards,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Peter
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday. It is very kind of you to invite me to your house and I hopefully want to celebrate your birthday with you and express my best wishes to you. Much to my regret, I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, for which I am now quite busy preparing. What’s worse, I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself.
I am truly sorry. I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apologies. I believe we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。請(qǐng)你以李華的名義給你的一位美國留學(xué)生朋友Peter寫一封電子郵件，說明你不能參加本周日在他家舉辦的生日聚會(huì)，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Much to my regret,這是固定詞組“使我遺憾的是”，I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, for which I am now quite busy preparing. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句， I have caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself.這里的I am really not myself.我不舒服，比I’m ill好多了， I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apologies.這句話用的是賓語從句，還有文章還用了What’s worse,這樣的詞組使文章更連貫。