Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached top of the mountain. That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes there. After having a short rest and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down. It rained even harder. We are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily.

Answer 1

Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not
prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high
going                                extremely
spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We could hear the
each                                         houses
sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached top of the
mixed                               the
mountain. That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes there. After having a short rest
What
and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down. It rained even harder. We
 
are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily.
were            but  

解析【小題1】go-going 固定結(jié)構(gòu)prevent sb (from) doing sth;
【小題2】extreme-extremely 用副詞修飾后面的narrow。
【小題3】every-each, 道路主要兩邊，所以這里使用both或者each，因?yàn)楹竺媸菃螖?shù)side，使用用each.
【小題4】house-houses.根據(jù)前面的some,可知這里應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)。
【小題5】mixing-mixed。固定詞組be mixed with.
【小題6】the 特指在某一天的中午。
【小題7】that-what.主語(yǔ)從句中缺主語(yǔ)，what可以在主語(yǔ)從句里做主語(yǔ)。That只能引導(dǎo)起主語(yǔ)從句，不能充當(dāng)任何成分。
【小題8】with   share是及物動(dòng)詞，不需要介詞。
【小題9】were 文章講述的是過(guò)去的事情。
【小題10】but 根據(jù)上下文可知前面說(shuō)我們渾身濕透，后面說(shuō)我們開(kāi)心的唱歌大笑，說(shuō)明是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。