Question

近來(lái)你們學(xué)校正準(zhǔn)備創(chuàng)建和申報(bào)“省綠色學(xué)�！闭�(qǐng)你據(jù)此給某英文報(bào)寫一篇短文
內(nèi)容包括 ※建設(shè)綠色校園的重要性……
※綠色校園不僅是指綠色的環(huán)境……
※為了建設(shè)綠色校園我們應(yīng)該……
注意 1、詞數(shù)100左右2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫 3、開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school? _______________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school? It means not only a green campus, but a "green" atmosphere for our study and life.
For one thing, a green campus means more plants, less pollution and no waste. Each of us can do something, such as planting trees and flowers or just saving electricity and water in our daily life. It will make a big difference. For another thing, it is necessary for us students to make great efforts to create a harmonious atmosphere of mutual trust and respect between teachers and students. Besides, it is important to keep a friendly and supportive attitude towards each other.
Accordingly, if everyone does one thing for our school, we'll surely turn our school into a better one.

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文寫作。本文討論的話題是“綠色學(xué)�！�；以及綠色學(xué)校的重要性和綠色學(xué)校的內(nèi)涵以及應(yīng)該如何建設(shè)綠色學(xué)校。在重要性方面可以從建設(shè)綠色學(xué)�？梢蕴岣邔W(xué)生的環(huán)境保護(hù)意識(shí)，具體做法可以從節(jié)約能源，保護(hù)校園環(huán)境，注意自己日常行為等方面具體展開(kāi)。適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。。寫的過(guò)程中，多注意靈活使用定語(yǔ)從句，包括非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。