【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(^)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last weekend we went mountain-climbing.

Even the heavy rain can not stop us.

We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit.

On either side of the road was green fields.

We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter.

At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes.

After short rest, we started going down

It rained more harder.

We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.

【答案】

【1】can 改為could

【2】extreme改為extremely

【3】spirit改為spirits

【4】was改為were

【5】mixing改為mixed

【6】去掉top

【7】theres改為where

【8】加上a

【9】more改為much

【10】and改為but

【解析】

【1】can 改為could；由第一句可知，文章使用的是過去時(shí)態(tài)，故第二句Even the heavy rain can not stop us. can要改為could。

【2】extreme改為extremely；副詞用來修飾形容詞或者動詞。第三句We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. narrow窄的，形容詞，古要用副詞來修飾。故extreme改為extremely。

【3】spirit改為spirits；spirit 精神，是可數(shù)名詞。第三句We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit.中spirit要改為spirits。

【4】was改為were；第四句On either side of the road was green fields. 中介詞短語作主語，主語要根據(jù)green fields來確定，green fields是復(fù)數(shù)形式，故謂語動詞be動詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。was改為were。

【5】mixing改為mixed；第五句We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter。mix，vt混合，be mixed with…混合…。這里用過去分詞短語作定語。故要把mixing改為mixed。

【6】去掉top。第六句At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes.

【7】there改為where；第六句At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes.中，后面部分是一個(gè)where引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾前面的mountain，要用關(guān)系代詞where引導(dǎo)。故把there改為where。

【8】加上a；第七句After short rest, we started going down中，在短暫的休息之后，應(yīng)該是After a short rest.故要加上a。

【9】more改為much；第八句It rained more harder.中形容詞的比較級一般用much修飾，故要把more改為much。

【10】and改為but；第九句We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.兩個(gè)句子中間是轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系。所以要把a(bǔ)nd改為but。

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