Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，參加了學(xué)校開(kāi)展的“有困難向誰(shuí)求助(Who do you turn to when in trouble?)”的調(diào)查活動(dòng)，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下表。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給報(bào)社編輯寫(xiě)一封信，反映以下內(nèi)容。

求助對(duì)象	比例	理由
同學(xué)、朋友	58%	年齡相仿，容易理解與交流
老師、家長(zhǎng)	30%	有愛(ài)心，有經(jīng)驗(yàn)，可以信任
無(wú)	12%	不愿與人交流，難以與人溝通

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全面，并表達(dá)出你的觀(guān)點(diǎn)；

3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

4.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Editor,

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I’m a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey—Who do you turn to when in trouble? Here are the results:

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m a student in Senior Three. We have made a survey—Who do you turn to when in trouble? Here are the results：

Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble as they’re almost of the same age, so they have a lot in common and understand each other easily.

Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask them for help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students.

Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with others. They have few friends.

In my opinion, when in trouble we’d better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.

Sincerely yours.

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇書(shū)信，要求把“有困難向誰(shuí)求助(Who do you turn to when in trouble?)”活動(dòng)的調(diào)查結(jié)果英語(yǔ)給報(bào)社編輯寫(xiě)一封信。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一篇書(shū)信，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，語(yǔ)句精煉句子銜接緊密，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)句子。So并列句中包含著as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句和when從句的省略結(jié)構(gòu)；They can be trusted by these students.含情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；同時(shí)ask them for help，of the same age，get on well with，In my opinion, when in trouble等的使用為文章增色添彩。