Question

【題目】幾個(gè)月以來，全國人民都投入到新冠肺炎疫情防控阻擊戰(zhàn)中。假定你是晨光中學(xué)的李 津，獲悉21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)正在組織以“A Touching Figure in My Heart”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇征文：

(1)疫情爆發(fā)期間最令你感動(dòng)的人物或是群體；

(2)令你感動(dòng)的理由；

(3)最想跟他/她或這個(gè)群體說的話。

注意：

(1)詞數(shù)不少于120；

(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。

參考詞匯：流行病；(迅速的)泛濫、蔓延epidemic

新型冠狀病毒 novel corona-virus / Covid-19

A Touching Figure in My Heart

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Answer 1

【答案】A Touching Figure in My Heart

With the joint efforts, the epidemic situation is not only under control but is taking a tum for the better as well. What touched me most is that health care staff in other provinces were sent to support Wuhan with lots of donation.

During this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, desperately rescued those infected. It is also you who made us build up our confidence to defeat it. Whenever the patients are confronted with serious condition or pessimistic emotions, you are always ready to help them out and cheer them up weaning inspiring smiles.

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks. But for your selfless devotion, we couldn’t have made such great breakthroughs in the campaign against the disease. I’m definitely convinced that with our effective measures, China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，幾個(gè)月以來，全國人民都投入到新冠肺炎疫情防控阻擊戰(zhàn)中。假定你是晨光中學(xué)的李 津，獲悉21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)正在組織以“A Touching Figure in My Heart”為主題的征文活 動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇征文：(1)疫情爆發(fā)期間最令你感動(dòng)的人物或是群體；(2)令你感動(dòng)的理由；(3)最想跟他/她或這個(gè)群體說的話。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：under control; take a tum; health care staff; support; regardless of; potential risk; build up; be confronted with; cheer up; words fail me; but for; devotion; make great breakthroughs等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。