Question

假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華。下面四幅圖描述了上周六和好友爬西山時你受傷的故事。請根據(jù)圖片的先后順序，為�？�“英語園地”寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于60.

Answer 1

Last Saturday, my friends and I went to climb the West Mountain. While climbing, we enjoyed the sunny weather and a beautiful view. We were very delighted to reach the top without much time or effort. However, we found it more difficult to go down, so we went slowly and helped each other when necessary. Though I took care a lot, unfortunately I slipped and hurt my leg badly and could hardly stood up. One of my friends came to me immediately and carried me on the back till we reached the foot of the mountain. I was very thankful and felt proud of having such good friends.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫作，一共四幅圖。做題時：1. 認真讀圖，可知四幅圖講述的是上周六和好友爬西山時你受傷的故事。2. 初步構思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復審核，修改錯誤。5. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關的時間、地點、人物等相關的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后，應在內(nèi)心構思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來。串連時，要注意使用適當?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。
【亮點說明】范文句式寫的比較出彩：While climbing, we enjoyed the sunny weather and a beautiful view. 這句話用了省略句， we found it more difficult to go down, so we went slowly and helped each other when necessary. 這句話用了it做形式賓語， I was very thankful and felt proud of having such good friends.這句話用了動名詞做賓語。