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16．假定你是李華，你從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知英國曼徹斯特市"2018中國文化年"組委會(huì)在中國招募志愿者，請(qǐng)你寫一封申請(qǐng)信參加，要點(diǎn)包括：
1．自身情況（英語能力等）；
2．工作能力（對(duì)中國文化非常了解等）；
3．希望獲準(zhǔn)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不算入總詞數(shù)；
3．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear sir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a senior high school student in China．Learning from the Internet that you are recruiting some volunteers in China，I'm writing to apply to join you．（高分句型一）
I believe I am qualified and suitable to be one of the volunteers．To begin with，having learned English for more than 10 years，I can speak English fluently，having no trouble expressing myself．（高分句型二）I once worked as a volunteer in similar activities held in Beijing，so I have relevant working experience．In addition，I'm outgoing and always ready to help others．Most importantly，I have a good understanding of Chinese culture，which enables me to introduce not only Chinese calligraphy，Chinese painting and Chinese musical instruments but also Chinese folk art like paper cutting and local operas，and typical Chinese diets．（高分句型三）
In brief，I am sure I can meet your requirements．I would appreciate it if you take my application into consideration．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，你從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知英國曼徹斯特市"2018中國文化年"組委會(huì)在中國招募志愿者，請(qǐng)你寫一封申請(qǐng)信參加，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：自身情況（英語能力等）；工作能力（對(duì)中國文化非常了解等）；希望獲準(zhǔn)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：apply to 申請(qǐng)做某事；To begin with首先；more than超過；Most importantly更重要的是；In brief簡(jiǎn)而言之；take my application into consideration考慮我的申請(qǐng)書；In addition另外；
Learning from the Internet that you are recruiting some volunteers in China，I'm writing to apply to join you．（高分句型一）
To begin with，having learned English for more than 10 years，I can speak English fluently，having no trouble expressing myself．（高分句型二）
Most importantly，I have a good understanding of Chinese culture，which enables me to introduce not only Chinese calligraphy，Chinese painting and Chinese musical instruments but also Chinese folk art like paper cutting and local operas，and typical Chinese diets．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
       I'm Li Hua，a senior high school student in China．Learning from the Internet that you are recruiting some volunteers in China，I'm writing to apply to join you．（高分句型一）
       I believe I am qualified and suitable to be one of the volunteers．To begin with，having learned English for more than 10 years，I can speak English fluently，having no trouble expressing myself．（高分句型二）I once worked as a volunteer in similar activities held in Beijing，so I have relevant working experience．In addition，I'm outgoing and always ready to help others．Most importantly，I have a good understanding of Chinese culture，which enables me to introduce not only Chinese calligraphy，Chinese painting and Chinese musical instruments but also Chinese folk art like paper cutting and local operas，and typical Chinese diets．（高分句型三）
       In brief，I am sure I can meet your requirements．I would appreciate it if you take my application into consideration．
       I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．