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刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

As the saying goes, chances favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience.

I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.

From this, I am firmly convincing that, no matter when chances arrive, we were able to seize them as long as we get well prepared.

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這是一篇記敘文。俗語(yǔ)說(shuō)，機(jī)會(huì)是給有準(zhǔn)備的人準(zhǔn)備的，作者從自己加入校隊(duì)的經(jīng)歷體悟到了這個(gè)道理。

1. 考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)從句As the saying goes可知，本句說(shuō)明的是一般的道理，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，因此favored改為favor。

2. 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：我從我的其中一個(gè)經(jīng)歷了解到了這個(gè)道理。本句的experience表示“經(jīng)歷”，是可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)one of 可知，用復(fù)數(shù)，故experience改為experiences。

3. 考查冠詞。根據(jù)I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team可知，應(yīng)該用a修飾可數(shù)名詞。故as后加a member，表示“我沒(méi)有能夠成為校隊(duì)的一個(gè)成員”。

4. 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。give up用doing做賓語(yǔ)，故play改為playing。

5. 考查連詞。my best friend stopped me表示“我最好的朋友阻止了我”，這和后句pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure之間是并列關(guān)系，所以用and連接兩句。故but改為and。

6. 考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句式。本句是強(qiáng)調(diào)句，強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ)my laziness and poor preparation，根據(jù)強(qiáng)調(diào)句的句式結(jié)構(gòu)it be…that…，故which改為that。

7. 考查介詞。every day表示“每天”，它的前面不用介詞，所以刪去on。

8. 考查形容詞和副詞的區(qū)別。修飾動(dòng)詞prepared用副詞fully。故full改為fully。

9. 考查派生詞。convincing表示“令人信服的”；convinced表示“確信的”，本句表示“我相信我們能抓住這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)”，故convincing改為convinced。

10. 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)I am firmly得知，本句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故were改為are。

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