Question

某中學(xué)生英文報近期開辟專欄，討論學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣問題。請你結(jié)合自身學(xué)習(xí)實際，按以下提示，用英文為該專欄寫一篇稿件。

1. 說明學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣與學(xué)習(xí)效果之間的關(guān)系；

2. 介紹一種好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣并提出養(yǎng)成該習(xí)慣的建議；

3. 描述自己在學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣方面存在的某個問題并給出改進(jìn)措施。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)120左右，開頭語已為你寫好；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. In reality, different students have different learning habits, which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly. Good habits always lead to high efficiency, while bad ones bring the opposite.
Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class. They think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better. If we find those materials interesting, we'll focus our attention on them for long. However, those dull lessons require our determination, self-controlling ability and confidence.

My classmates always call me "Mr. forgetful", because I cannot memorize those I have learnt. I know that it is because I don't spend some time in memorizing them after class. My teachers advise me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud, which they think will help improve my memory.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求結(jié)合自身學(xué)習(xí)實際，就學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣問題為專欄寫一篇稿件。內(nèi)容包括1. 說明學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣與學(xué)習(xí)效果之間的關(guān)系；2介紹一種好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣并提出養(yǎng)成該習(xí)慣的建議；

3. 描述自己在學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣方面存在的某個問題并給出改進(jìn)措施。分析作文要求可知文章應(yīng)使用第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時。根據(jù)要點提示可以在謀篇布局時考慮使用三段式，分三段分別介紹三個要點，根據(jù)需要可以調(diào)整要點順序。為了提高作文檔次，在寫作時要注意盡量使用高級詞匯和高級句式，避免句子的單一�？梢允褂枚ㄕZ從句，狀語從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等等。此外還要注意內(nèi)容的連貫和上下文的過渡和銜接。

【亮點說明】本篇范文使用了經(jīng)典的三段式，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點全面，時態(tài)，人稱正確，很好的完成了寫作任務(wù)。作者在文中使用了大量的短語，比如In reality,lead to， concentrate on，focus one’s attention on , spend time in doing sth , advise sb to do sth 等，顯示了作者詞匯的豐富。而且定語從句which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly.并列句hile bad ones bring the opposite.，賓語從句Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class.狀語從句 If we find those materials interesting,等復(fù)合句的出現(xiàn)也給文章增添了亮點，提高了檔次。

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