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一個(gè)英國(guó)中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)訪問(wèn)你校，你作為學(xué)生代表向來(lái)訪者口頭介紹神舟七號(hào)發(fā)射的相關(guān)情況，介紹內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1.神舟七號(hào)宇宙飛船于2008年9月25日晚上9：10分升空。

2．這是中國(guó)的第三次載人飛行。飛船成功地將三人小組送人太空，小組中的翟志剛進(jìn)行了我國(guó)首次太空行走。

3.太空行走在北京時(shí)間2008年9月27日下午進(jìn)行，持續(xù)大約26分鐘。之后宇航員返回地球。

4.這次太空飛行任務(wù)持續(xù)了四天，它將有助于中國(guó)掌握兩顆衛(wèi)星的對(duì)接技術(shù)(technology for，docking two orbiters)。

5．中國(guó)成為繼前蘇聯(lián)、美國(guó)之后世界上第三個(gè)能夠?qū)崿F(xiàn)太空行走的國(guó)家。

6．我們?yōu)榇烁械津湴痢?/p>

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Dear friends,

  Welcome to our school！It' s a great honor for me to say something about China' s Shenzhou VII-spaceship.

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Dear friends,

Welcome to our school ! It' s a great honor for me to say something about China' s Shenzhou VII spaceship. China' s Shenzhou VII spaceship took off at 9:10 pm on Sep 25, 2008. It was China' s third manned space journey, which successfully launched a three-man crew into the space where one of them, Zhai Zhigang, made China' s first spacewalk. On Sep 27, Zhai Zhigang successfully made a 26-minute spacewalk and then the astronauts returned to Earth. The 4-day journey is expected to help China master the technology for docking two orbiters. The success of Shenzhou VII has made China the third country in the world that has made spacewalk after the former Soviet Union and the USA, so we all take pride in it.

That' s all. Thank you !