Question

2．假如你是高一學生王剛，在放寒假之前你想寫一封信給你的英文老師Mrs．Zhou．
信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個方面：
1）Mrs．Zhou的課堂生動有趣，自己進步很大；
2）自己在學習中的困難；
3）給老師的教學建議（至少兩條）；
注意：1）不要逐條翻譯；
2）字數(shù)為120左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3）不得使用真實姓名．
Dear Mrs．Zhou，
How time flies!I have been your student for nearly half a year．
                                           
Best wishes to you!
Yours，
Wang Gang．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇英文書信，寫一封信給你的英文老師Mrs．Chen．信的開頭結(jié)尾都已經(jīng)給出了，只要寫好正文，正文的內(nèi)容是：1）Mrs．Chen的課堂生動有趣，自己進步很大； 2）自己在學習中的困難；3）給老師的教學建議（至少兩條）；寫信與寫文章一樣，要分段寫，每段有一個中心思想，內(nèi)容要表達清楚，語言要簡單明了，態(tài)度要誠懇禮貌．給親友的信還應(yīng)親切熱情．考試時必須把規(guī)定的內(nèi)容寫清楚．正文結(jié)束時，還可寫一兩句表達心愿的話，如：Best wishes to you/Remember me to your family/Hoping to hear from you soon等．

解答 Dear Mrs．Chen，
How time flies!I have been your student for nearly half a year．
To begin with，I want to say thanks to you for your hard work．（高分句型）Besides，we all enjoy your lively and interesting class．And with your help，we have made such great progress in English．（高分句型）
To be honest，I still have some puzzles．I can't keep so many new words in mind and don't know how to use them correctly．What's more，grammar is a big problem to me．（高分句型）I often mix up its rules．Would you please help me with these problems？
Mrs．Chen，as we hope to improve our listening ability，could you please speak more English in Class？（高分句型）And we can't bear so much homework of all the subjects，so would you please reduce the amount of English homework？
Best wishes to you!
Yours，
Wang Gang

點評 寫作正文時就和寫提綱作文一樣，要點不能省略，要完全包括在內(nèi)．要注意使用合適的連接詞和高級的詞匯和短語，也可以使用不同的句式．