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15．假設你是英語科代表，請根據(jù)以下提示，口頭通知你班美國學生參加學校舉辦的一次講座．
1．時間：周三下午4點；
2．地點：圖書館；
3．內容：清華大學教授唐文方介紹中美文化差異；演講后可以和唐教授交談，介紹你在中國的經(jīng)歷，有對中國文化不理解的問題可以詢問唐教授；
4．提示：準時到場．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Boys and girls，
May I have your attention，please？
                                                                            
That's all．Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息和所給開頭，口頭通知你班美國學生參加學校舉辦的一次講座．寫作要點包括1．時間：周三下午4點；2．地點：圖書館；3．內容：清華大學教授唐文方介紹中美文化差異；演講后可以和唐教授交談，介紹你在中國的經(jīng)歷，有對中國文化不理解的問題可以詢問唐教授；4．提示：準時到場．寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重要詞匯：be honored to（很榮幸能做某事）； cultural differences （文化差異）； between…and （在…和…之間）；share（分享）；puzzle（使…困惑）；communicate with （與…溝通交流）； on time（按時）
高分句型：1．①Having been studying cultural differences in Qinghua University for many years，Mr．Tang will talk about the differences between American and Chinese cultures，②which may be quite an interesting topic．
                 ①現(xiàn)在分詞短語在句中作狀語；②關系代詞which引導一個非限制性定語從句．
                 2．①Since you have stayed in China for half a year，②if you have anything that puzzles you，it would be great to talk with Mr．Tang．
                   ①since在這里引導一個原因狀語從句；②if you have anything that puzzles you在這里做插入語，起到補充說明的作用

解答 Boys and girls，
May I have your attention，please？
There will be a lecture in our library at 4：00 on Wednesday afternoon．We are much honored to have invited Professor Tang Wenfang to give you the lecture．Having been studying cultural differences in Qinghua University for many years，Mr．Tang will talk about the differences between American and Chinese cultures，which may be quite an interesting topic（高分句型一）．After the lecture，you're welcome to share your experiences in China with everyone else present．Since you have stayed in China for half a year，if you have anything that puzzles you，it would be great to talk with Mr．Tang（高分句型二）．He will be glad to communicate with you．Please be present on time．
That's all．Thank you．

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意要點的提煉要全，關鍵短語和句型要寫對，準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．