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4．隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，越來越多的文化遺產(chǎn)（cultural relics）遭到破壞．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高中生李華，請(qǐng)給當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)社寫一封信，就以下兩個(gè)方面談?wù)勀愕目捶�，以紀(jì)念6月10日的"世界文化遺產(chǎn)日（the World Cultural Heritage Day）"．
要點(diǎn)：1．文化遺跡的重要性（見證歷史和文化，幫助人們了解過去；稀少，有價(jià)值）
          2．呼吁人們保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)
注意：1．要涵蓋所給要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)100左右；
          2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
          3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Editor，
I am Li Hua，a senior student from Hong Xing High School．
Nowadays，with the development of our society，more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing．（高分句型一）So we must attach importance to the problem and try our best to protect them．
First，cultural relics represent our historic cultures，which offer us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past．（高分句型二）Also，they are the roots of a city or a place．They can help us make our traditional cultures handed down from generation to generation．More importantly，most of them have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable．
For above reasons，with the World Cultural Heritage Daycoming，we shouldn't hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures．（高分句型三）Ihope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics．


Sincerely
Li Hua
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，越來越多的文化遺產(chǎn)（cultural relics）遭到破壞．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高中生李華，請(qǐng)給當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)社寫一封信，就以下兩個(gè)方面談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ�以紀(jì)念6月10日的"世界文化遺產(chǎn)日（the World Cultural Heritage Day）"．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：文化遺跡的重要性（見證歷史和文化，幫助人們了解過去；稀少，有價(jià)值）；呼吁人們保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：with the development of our society隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展；attach importance to認(rèn)為…重要；from generation to generation一代又一代；More importantly更重要的是；call on 呼吁；
Nowadays，with the development of our society，more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing．（高分句型一）
First，cultural relics represent our historic cultures，which offer us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past．（高分句型二）
For above reasons，with the World Cultural Heritage Day coming，we shouldn't hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      I am Li Hua，a Senior student from Hong Xing High School．Nowadays，with the development of our society，more and more cultural relics are facing the danger of disappearing．（高分句型一）So we must attach importance to the problem and try our best to protect them．
      First，cultural relics represent our historic cultures，which offer us a great opportunity to learn about what happened in the past．（高分句型二）Also，they are the roots of a city or a place．They can help us make our traditional cultures handed down from generation to generation．More importantly，most of them have survived for a long time and they are usually very rare and valuable．
      For above reasons，with the World Cultural Heritage Day coming，we shouldn't hesitate to call on people to take action to save our treasures．（高分句型三）I hope more and more people will become concerned about protecting our cultural relics．
 
                                                                      
 Sincerely
                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．